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She notices Fierce is alone.. and speaks with him, she not only finds out that h's been kicked out of his home by his religious family... she reveals that she herself is unable to take over her family business, until she's able to start her own. But she'd need a helper, which she needs him for.. Becuase Fierce has nowhere else to go, he agrees to help her... Andthey start a small business from scratch....
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At first the do manual labor, and it's at this time that Felix learns she's of the evolved half of humanity, which scares him. It's then explined that religious people belive the're demons sent to eat humans.. Tiara reveals she--no one wants to each other, and even if she planned to: why would she bo tnroygh the trouble of hiring him to help her start a business? After this, Fierce starts to trust her.. and things go smoothly...
-It's at this part of the comic it leans from slice-of-life to #SoulEater, with the partners getting into random fights...

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They inadvertendly have to fend against street punks and rival businesses, who try to beat them down--remove competition. And it's at this point another evolution's introduced: Tiar fuses with Fierce, which gives him wings and increases every ability they possess combined. The fusion is a well known, but difficult to do and keep up process.. but the partners can do it easily from the beginng and continue to, to get pass any threats they encounter...
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After a timeskip; they have a business where they can work from their apartment.. until Tiara's family calls her back home to train to take over the business. Fierce knows how to take care of himself in every way, thanks to fusing so many times... (retaining knowledge from this..) but is crestfallen about his partner's leaving. Though he makes another friend later, he's again very quiet like he was years ago...
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Meanwhile, Tiara is unable to enjoy her claiming the business and decides to continue her own, with Fierce...

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Once she does, she tells Fierce, and he agrees to it. They only need to get aanother permit to start their own company... but upon seeing a corrupt politician--the person they needit from.. things start to get dark somewhat fast.. until the friend Firce made shows up and violently saves them...
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The partners survive the attack, and the final arc happens when Tiara takes Felix back to her racist parents... The ending ends up revealing something very surprising about the fusions and evolution...

Why it's erased: There wasn't much to start off with, when I created the script, I wanted to have better art--illustrations for it once the idea was out... but I couldn't force the look I wanted, so I asked for help in a forum... (Like I said, I didn't expect to get any right then...) and someone volunteered and changed everything into #FulmineAstra! As much that exists of this comic is: what's on here and... what was on Wattpad Amino before it deleted everything...

Final notes: As I said, this was turned into Fulmine Astra. Fierce turned into Felix, amd Tiara into Tatiana.
Fierce went from being a shy boy, andinto a calculating business man. And..
Tiara went from a business woman, to a antisocial b*d*ss heroine.
She also turned into the main character in the Superhero comic, while she treats Felix equally in the original story...
Also, I have no idea what ages I want the characters to be... I started them at.. 10.. but tehy acted more so like teens.. Tiara though IS suppose think futher than her age.. Teenage would be better for both, but how Fierce thought and acted wouldn't match up to how'd he act as a teenager.. Yet, no one kicks a kid out at 10, ..right?
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Also...there's 2 more IMPORTANT details about these two, but I MIGHT have to post to tomorrow...

I really like their designs and story :0 do they like eachother? XD Curious lol
I also think that what you say could happen at a teen age, they would be too young being just ten in my opinion, but it's your choice n.n

@xNerax Yes, they end up falling for eachother near the end. (But Felix's straight up afraid of her near the start...)
What age do you think they should've been? I can't imagine a teenage boy being afraid of girls at all ("strange looking" or not), so 10 seemed like the perfect age... But it might be too young for the working part..
..I guess how one thinks at any age would have to factor into it, too...

Well I think that depends a lot on his backstory lol
I can use Gray as an example since he is a drow and in his species males are usually considered non worthy and mistreated by womans so that would be a reason to be scared of them lmao xD (not that he is but still)
But Felix could have been scared of them because maybe some girl bullied him at school or something and he can't get rid of the trauma? I'm not sure XDD tell me if you come up with something ^^

!!!! @XNei_YuiX, that gave me a idea! One of the reoccuring things that will ALWAYS make me be afraid of someone IS: cannibalism!
Sounds legit, right? But it goes deeper than that: as a kid, a lot of cartoons would scare me, becaue they'd showed someone GETTING EATEN and try to play it off as "funny". Years later, nomatter who does it, seeing someone eat ANYTHING alive is disturbing and traumatic all at once. Felix could witness a similar looking female use her evolution the wrong way on TV or something, even as a cartoon... And as a teen, get kicked out for whatever, and STILL be afraid of any female with powers, despite his age, hormones ect....
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Thanks for the idea!