Summary: This comic has a COMPLETELY different theme than it's original conception... but... I'll tell you this one's plot!
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#FulmineAstra's plot centers around half the human-race gaining animalistic- #evolutions.
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Story starts with our Hero: #Felix, losing money trying to (ironically) sell comics, because people now HAVE powers. Until he sees our heroine: #Tatiana, nearly kill two robbers. He then approached her with his get-rich-quick-scheme! They'd both sign-up to be #Superheroes!
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The Colors! Gallery moderators will look at it as soon as possible.
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11 Jun, 2020, 2:29 pm
(Continued)...There's a organization centered around saving people from criminals with evolutions, who prey on the normal people... Our heroes both sign-up there, and Tatiana is named a Superhero and Felix as a sidekick (he gets many gadgets to keep up with others...) and the two head off to stop crimes!
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The comic mostly follows their greedy, bickered filled rise though the rankings, defeating criminals and making incredible amounts of money, in a plan to quit the organization when they reach a target amount! But... Upon reaching a certian rank: Tatiana's called off to help other Superheroes, and has to leave Felix behind...
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During this time; Felix teams up with another Superhero, and learns, despite everything: him and Tatiana worked best together...
Meanwhile, she herself realized something was up with th othe Superheroes and the situation they were in... Nobody would listen to her though, and she eagerly awaited to see Felix again..
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This sets off the surprising, final arc!
11 Jun, 2020, 2:34 pm
Why it's erased: As I said, it was a completely different comic at first, I wanted help with the art, though.. And someone volunteered to help, but wanted several changes. This is the reason only random artwork bewteen me and them exist of the comic. There was a collection of all the art together, but it's all destroyed by hypocrits, so.... Random art and a bunch of scripts are all that's left. Even the original drafts are gone, thanks to Amino erasing them. I technically SHOULD have some left... but they're lost in Google--gmail somewhere... Yeah... this barely got a chance to breathe... Though I think it had SOME potential..
11 Jun, 2020, 2:45 pm
Final Notes: This comic WASN'T suppose to be this way, as I said.... But I DID get into it.... Before my comic-partner went to college, we had alot done, including a short story and main character designs. They wanted it to be like #BNHA, but I knew this would be a bit much, and had a short 10 chapter/script comic ready...
They couldn't even go through with that, this.. was disappointing; I never intended to do the comic as soon as I did, but asked anyway for unpaid work for fun, to see what people would say.. But thisperson actually volunteered, unforunately.. you literally get what you pay for, and got random art...
The main-characters were drastically chnaged, too: Felix became calculating and greedy. And Tatiana become relaxed yet violent, though I still like the charaters, this andthe comparison I'll post later are DRASTICALLY different.
Last but least.. (To be continued)
11 Jun, 2020, 2:57 pm
(Continued...)
These 2 have two different versions of themselves: Felix was more fearful and shy before.. where now he's only fearful because he has to fight with and along side people with powers! Tatiana was upbeat, a prefect and extraverted/friendly.. and now she's very stand-offish, and mostly associates with Felix because he promised to get her money. Her design was changed the most, too, and she became the Star of the comic, rather than a dual-protagonist. The final thing is that the she evolved past a point where she could be affected in anyway except by brute force, thanks to her still evolving self.. She also evolved Felix by mistake by electrocuting him randomly (though she calls them "love-zaps") making him have chameleon like powers by the end of the comic, which ironically saved her life in the final battle...
Also... there's something else I want to tell, but I'll wait until I show you the original-version of this comic...
11 Jun, 2020, 3:09 pm
The concept of the story sounds cool I like how straightforward it is, it shows that you had it planned for a while or very well in a short amount of time.
Great job on the costumes too. Immediately though of them being duos while keeping themselves as their own individuals because of the colors being changed around. (Like how Tatiana has blue pants while felix has the blue shirt but, it's a different shade)
Now, the development stage of the actual comic (paragraphs/comments 2 and 3) I read through, and let's say, that is a bit disappointing. When I read Amino, I totally understood ^^". At Amino, you can get anyone. Literally ANYONE-- whether it be a rock or a hidden gen of a person that will actually help you. Hidden gems are hidden amongst many rocks unfortunately.
If you're using Amino again to find someone, have you ever tried getting someone from an art Amino server. One that is not a fandom (they may change it to fit the fandom their in) and one who's posts in a mature manner (not constantly in drama, and such. To check for framam, you can simply look at the comment section. If you see they have made a callout of another user, that's another sign). Overall, Amino is a place mostly for kids, some teens, and some adults. Depends on where you look ^w^
12 Jun, 2020, 4:34 am
@Angelchild777 Say wha...!?
12 Jun, 2020, 4:44 am
@Meowstar Thanks so much for actually reading this, I wrote it with the intention of simply recording it somewhere else, so the idea wouldn't completely die; I didn't think anyone would take the time to read it!
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The characters' looks are mostly my idea, with the little I remember my comic-partner wanting for them! I wish I could've drawn them more realistic like they did it! The designs are physically closer to how they were before the comic was changed over to Superheroes.. (And like you thought; the story was done VERY quickly and I had to use the actual thought-out original script as a basis... )
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Also.. I probably CAN'T go back on Animo... I had NO idea mostly kids were there.. I wrote mature stories and a few people complained, but I DID put warnings up like the admins said.. Yet they banned me anyway, so........ I have no idea where to look/post whenever I get the urge to try this again...
12 Jun, 2020, 7:34 pm
@cleric
Oh, ya welcome! ^v^
And banned? Yikes! Yeeeaaah, Amino is mostly for kids. I found that out very quickly in all the art communities I found. -_-
Anyways, I'm sure there's other places that you can look for help in. I can't think of any right now other than scrolling throigh social medias and randomly finding people who want to help. If I think of one, I'll let ya knowQ