Eugenes tale part 2 by Chibithepony

I quickly turned to see what hit my head and saw that one of the many books piled on the shelf had fallen. "ooww" i said rubbing my head as i began to walk to the main room. i peered into the darkness "Mother fath..." i was cut off by a large uproar "SURPRISE!!" i instantly smiled as i saw my dad and mom standing next to my 4 best friends. Daisyflame was flying above the allways stuttering night dancer. Sidgle strike stood proudly in his white cap and brineheart the jokester was replacing half

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
02 Sep, 2012, 5:36 am
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Chibithepony

02 Sep, 2012, 5:55 am

of the cups with dribble cups. "happy birthday son!" my father said as he rubbed my usual part out my hair "...daaad" i whined as i tryed to fix it in vain. "Ken, darling your embarresing the dear." my mom said oblivios to my constanly red face. Almost as soon as my mom and dad quit doteing on me i trotted over to my friends " hey Eugene! happy birthday!" they yelled in near unison except for nightdancer. "hi everypony... wheres luckyscope?" i asked anxiously. "i think she said something about an exam that she had to go retake!" replied Sidgle "hap..p..p.y bir.thhd.day eug.ggene " said nightdancer as she stood up. I remember playing tons meaningless party games and talking to friends for a while but ill skip to opening presents... I had just got a specialy enchanted bracelet from sidgel strike "if you twist it right it will summon the nearest pencil for when you write your storys!" he explained as i set it on the table The next gift was wraped in a strange material that i couldent place when i opened it inside there was a strange symbol with the word Pennance under it i didnt take much note of it then but i wish i did... soon it was time for us to eat the cake my mom made me take a picture, but they pulled the cake up to me and a purple dragon that my parents had hired lit the candles i blew them out wishing this next year my parents wouldn't dote (tearstain) on me as much we all passed out the cake and ate it i played with my friends for about 5 minutes when brineheart passed out, i want to tell my parents to see them asleep at the table i turned back around and sidgle was fighting to keep his eyes open, the blackness began to cover my vision i say a blue unicorn in the doorway as i faded into the black ocean of uncociousness...

Chibithepony

02 Sep, 2012, 6:04 am

sorry if this isn't as good as the begining im better at the dark moments

TheOddSocks

02 Sep, 2012, 8:54 am

So interesting! Can't wait for more!

SS and Meiko

02 Sep, 2012, 10:18 am

I like how you incorporated LuckyScope's flight test failure. owo

Rainbow Wolf

02 Sep, 2012, 5:56 pm

Oooo, exciting! Cant wait till next part!

StormClash5

03 Sep, 2012, 7:07 am

Luckyscope, YOU HAVE FAILED.
Sorry. If you don't get it, I think Chibi will. And Chibi, good job on the writing, up until the passing out part, it seems like the average birthday party.

MistaBeans!

09 Sep, 2012, 1:12 am

At first I was like, ''He was robbed, and his family ki.lled! D :''. Then I was like, ''Oh yay, it's just a party!''. Then.. I don't even know..

Dj NightMix

26 Sep, 2012, 6:35 pm

was it luckyscop :o or was luckyscope lucky :b

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