You are really getting better at anatomy, though the head looks slightly too big.
I never actually thought how interesting it would be to watch all of my friends art styles develope and improve alongside mine when I first started this art acc.

Blast: *Shivers, clutching his stomach* >_<' B-big.. sis..? Urrrgh... Everything hurts...

Kuruki: Fear not, I am here.. *Pulls on the bars* Nngh-! N-no good, my dragonic strength is too far diminished.. Sala, we may need a key-!

Sala: The guards may have had one. Search the bodies, men!

Dragonkin soldiers: Yes ma'am-!
Blast: I-I'm sorry I w-went out into the forest.. I-I hurt you e-even more.. :'c

Kuruki: Hush, do not speak ill of yourself! I care more for you than some bowl of berries! *Reaches hand between bars* You know that, right?

Blast: T^T B-BIG SIS!! *Crawls to bars and takes her hand* ( cont. )

Kuruki: There there. :)
Dragonkin soldier: Got it- *Hurrk*! Captain, use this..

Sala: Good work.. Hold tight, little one-! *Unlocks the cage*

Kuruki: *Picks him up* ..He feels cold. We have to... get him as far away as possible from this horrible place. >:(

Sala: Agreed.. Let's go. We need not spend another second here..!

@XIWitheredHeartsIX h, thanks! My anatomy's getting there, but I still need to work on propotions, though. It's still really finickey. :'D Glad you think so!

I really do like how that background looks on the left side.

i Like how you Did The Lighting its so Pretty and The Bars Shadow is Really Cool!

That Part at The ending was so Sad Were She Took hes Hand..(T^T)

@ShihouxAdventure Thanks, I like it, too. Especially the lighting. :o Makes it real spooky-looking!

@viggyunju Thanks a lot! After our back-and-forth, I had to throw some in some sad stuff in, lol. x'D Better suspense!