This actually looks better! :0

I think it's lookin' rad man,
but I'm not that good with perspectives yet so idk.

Uh I like the other one better but you still did better than I could do, I'm terrible at drawing that angle heheh v(>v<')v

ghghgh i want to try to help you but ive written and erased 3 different things trying to explain stuff already :'D my brain does not want to work right now...

if you can, look up "drawing humans from an upwards perspective" or something along those lines and check stuff out. i havent personally looked that up myself but i know there's bound to be advice stuff that shows up.

(if youre one of those types that's proud or stubborn on looking up advice stuff, dont be, take in as much as you can, it cant hurt, only help. im only saying this cause a few folks ive tried to point in the direction of GudHelpfulStuff pretty much said "meh" cause stubbornness and pride lol)

errr wait i worded that badly

try looking up "drawing humans from a bird's eye perspective" that's better english than what i initially suggested lol.

good luck, i hope you find helpful stuff. /if you dont find any/ i could try making a picture to kind of explain stuff in a basic fashion.

ALSO-- comparing this to the first version you posted, the body on this one is better, it shows the perspective enough for the viewer to know what's going on (if one only looks at the body), it's just the head that's still iffy.

Show less body/torso! It helps!