Broken Mirror by TheDeputySheriff

Singed wooden figures
bodies made of clay
yesterday is faded
the past has gone away
running through the darkness
blank photos on the wall
up an endless staircase
down a burning hall
shining silver cobwebs
paths of broken glass
we all control the future
but can't bring back the past
the one thing we remember
an overall conclusion
the past was never present
its only an illusion
#sundaypoem
haven't made one in so long
Thanks for the likes and comments!

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
10 Nov, 2019, 1:00 pm
02:32

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N3mneko

10 Nov, 2019, 7:45 pm

Nice poem and wonderful picture! The sea looks calm. I like the way you did with the surface.
Re: Thank you! I will find a way to balance the darker and lighter tones to make it stand out.

SpiralingUpward

10 Nov, 2019, 11:05 pm

I didn't realize how much i missed your Sunday poems!! I look forward to reading more! x)

ishi_chan

10 Nov, 2019, 11:41 pm

Wow almost as good as the danger kids

JJMAwaken

12 Nov, 2019, 8:26 pm

nice drawing, I just realized from the stingray shadow that they kind of look like electric guitars, I wonder if anyone has ever painted one to look like a stingray. I digress... nice poem too :)

Pooky

13 Nov, 2019, 8:41 pm

aaaaah i love it! >w<
i'm gonna have to do one again soon, its been too long.

Astrogeon

19 Nov, 2019, 6:06 am

This looks so nice, it makes me want to go out and swim in it.
The poem is also pretty cool!
:D

Astrogeon

19 Nov, 2019, 6:09 am

Re: Thanks for the nice comment! To be honest, I wish I worked on backgrounds as much as I did with characters- I'm not good at it... yet.
^ .^''

Astrogeon

27 Nov, 2019, 11:44 pm

Re: (LATE) That's too bad. If you think of anything later, I'll definitely try!
:D

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