*countinued*

The Crane School kept a close eye on her Ying without her knowing.

A few monthes later she while she was picking herbs and found a crash of some sort of small ship. Inside apeared to be what looked like a man. She brought him back home and nursed him back to health. It turns out he wasn't human. As he was much bigger had a third eye and could grow four arms. He was a triclops named Binx. He stayed with Ying untill he manged to fix his ship. He lived with Ying for nine monthes and was very kind to her. Binx was keepen away from the village to do being an alien.
They fell in love and as a result Ying became pregnet with Tien Shinhan. Binx never got to see his son becuase he left to go back to his home planet before Tien was born yet. Binx promised Ying he would return though.

Another nine monthes passed and Tien was born. Ying styled Tien's hair to cover his closed third eye for a good pouprse to keep it hidden from other people. At the age of 7 Tien started to grow an

interist in martail arts. And enjoyed watching the Crane School take out InoShikaCo. Ying became worried her son would want to learn martail arts from the Crane School so she kept him away from them. But word got out Ying had a son and Master Shen saw him as a great member for the Crane School. He often acted nice towrds Tien to get him to want to become a member. But Ying knew the truth and kept Tien away from the School. Ying was a very protecive mother and tuaght Tien reading, writing, and mathmatics. They both had a good life until...
The Cane Schools sceams only got worse so Ying exposded the Crane Schools evilness to the village. The towns folk agreed that the Crane School was evil and speaded the word to other villages. After the Crane School found out about this Mercenary Tao was sent out to kill Ying but not harm Tien.
When Tien was out playing when Tao burnt down Ying's house with her and she died. Tien ran home and discovered what happened.
Tao lied to Tien saying he

was trying to help his mother but was to late to save her. Tien only being 7 beliaved Tao. Tien cryed and cryed about his mother death and was very mad he wasn't there to do something. Tao told him that if he joined the Crane School they would take good care of him and teach him martail so something like this would never happen again. Tien took Tao's hand and was raised by Shen touaght by the evil ways. When Tien turned 9 he became a offical student. And his new life began.

As for Ying her spirt made it into heaven and she met Binx who died at some point as well. Even though Tien was part of the Crane School she still loved him and was proud on how strong he became.

Also the Crane School wanted Tien as a student becuase the knew of his power deep in him. That he had blood of a triclops.

Dang this turned out longer then I thought lol. Hopfully yall aren't to lazy to read it all. xD

There are alot of details I left out but if I added them her story would've been waaaay to long. xD

Also I'll draw Yings husband to.. So you can understand more of where he came from.

Oh one more thing. I forgot to add this in the picture but. The two eyes is the top one is Ying's and the bottom one is adult Tien's.

Whoa... that would mean Tien's half-alien too, like Gohan, Goten, Trunks and Bulla!? (I think there's more, but I can't remember...) if he was: he could still get stronger than human levels and could join in fights he had to back out if later (in DBZ). Cyclopses, (Cyclopsi?) could be a warrior race like saiyans!

Also, Tien's mom's SO much better than how I pictured her! (Again, I'm not sure why I thought she'd be bald...)

Also, also forgive my over-excitement? It's just if he's part cyclops/alien in your story: that opens up a lot of different possibilities for later!

I thought she was Mulan XD

Re: Yeah just a little bit especially when its just a quick glance

Seriously, I would totally buy this as Tien's real mom. Geebus, how do you make such believable Dragonball characters?? D:

//Re: I really don't wanna see that in the water. x'D

Re// thanks you and youre welcome:3 and dont worry I understand it also happened to me,when in miiverse I was telling stories,after finishing it, I responded

Very interesting I would like your story to be in dragon ball, it is very good! and it would be great,very good argument and interesting ,I got a lot into the history of Ying O3O

Re: I think the story's great! It sheds light on a bunch of things that's left out otherwise! It'll be fun seeing everything from his side as well!

...Also.. TIEN'S CANNONICALLY PART CYCLOPS!!!!? I didn't know, I thought the 3rd eye meant he meditated/reaching enlightenment, and that you added the cyclops thing: I didn't know he's already alien! ...I guess that's why Super Buu's human extinction attack didn't work on him...

Re: Ahhh, this is still all new to me! I'm gonna look it up myself. (This whole time I thought he just trained differently than the others/completely human...)

Re: Thanks Goofy! And this is really great! I'm sorry I don't comment on you and your sis' posts more.

just wondering but can you add me on discord?