Tips/critigue (idk how to spell that xD) would be appriciated ;P

OOOO DAT SHADING
I love it, it looks cool as heck.

You actually did really well on the placement of the light and shadows, you were mindful of the shape/dimensions of the char and they (my mind's derping and can't recall what they are and their name lol) look pretty 3d as a result. Thumbs up!

As for tips or critique, the wings could stand some work, their structure and feather arrangement are a bit off. (The feathers moreso than the wings themselves)

When you get the chance I'd advise looking up "bird wing anatomy" and somethin like "bird wing feathers" (and/or "bird wing close up" or something) and observing the way rows of feathers look.

Looking up individual bird species can be good too because some photos of [bird] that show off the wings decently don't show up when you just google "bird wing," but you have to be careful with that cause different bird species have different wings and you don't wanna get stuff mixed up. lol

^ cause different bird species have different wing shapes* I done goofed.

If you'd like, I could make some basic thingies showing off the rough arrangement of feathers on some wings and how the feathers go over eachother when wings are folded to give you a rough idea on how stuff goes-

This turned out awesome!!! Beautiful work!! Amazing job!

SO beautiful!!