PLEASE READ, I finished the 2nd Arc and I'm in the awkward: scripting-before-I-illustrate part. And need to ask a few questions.

I'll be doing drafts of Humonculi (this one is the first thing that came to mind) and want opinions on them, by now: I don't expect it but: If one looks too disturbing TELL ME FIRST?
Question2: should I try to WRITE the text or continue typing?

Question3: Who dies next? Principal or Paladin?

#Homunculus
#Forbidden
#Magic
#Draft