Loss by Alkaline

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So I woke up at 4 am for some reason and then I couldn't fall back asleep, so I decided to draw and write instead. :P
hmmmmmm though this piece is a little choppy, I'll probably have to go over this writing here again

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
12 Sep, 2018, 11:08 am
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FadingGlory

12 Sep, 2018, 1:51 pm

Woahhhh! If I hadn't recognized the style of the horse, I wouldn't have guessed this was yours! Aweosme paintingg, and equally cool story!

FadingGlory

12 Sep, 2018, 1:54 pm

Re: Lol! XD Haha I don't blame you - it's the reason so few people here manage to continue their comics after the first few pages. My suggesrion would be to simplify as much as possible in panels where their is one focus point. Also, to reacue your hands and eyes from cramping, normal comic pages of that size would have only a few panels per page. It greatly reduces the clutter and creates more suspense. Just tips if you're going to make more!

RanchRobin

12 Sep, 2018, 2:40 pm

This is so gorgeous! The atmosphere and plants look amazing! And that horse anatomy is super impressive!

Xerveltal Yneas

13 Sep, 2018, 5:18 am

wow this is rly pretty??

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