God's Hospital For The Faulty by salmonfishies
Will there ever be a time
where I can be a pure good?
Will there be a time when all bad thought, feelings, emotions end?
Will I be the perfection my god led to create?
Will I be the moral atrophy my world wants to be my goodest self?
I struggle
With the rush of hate for good men
With life gained spitting at others low bodies
Am I only this?
Am I a bad patient?
Or does life only feign it;
This pureness of heart?
Do I have to be it to be accepted?
If so, I am not it
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21 Aug, 2018, 11:32 pm
If earth's my fated hospital
I will be on it's live support till the end of time
My mind will never follow your guidlines for release
To keep me alive would only be cruelty
21 Aug, 2018, 11:37 pm
/just a poem, it was from the point of view of a man who was thrown away by society for who he is. He causes harm on purpose, but society rejects people who aren't lawfully perfect. So he regrets living. He regrets using life's resources when god clearly didn't intent them to be used to keep people like him alive. Though, is anyone any different? Does conformity truly make you a better person? Aren't you just the same but in a shell? You could do it too. Anyone has it in them. No one has purity.
22 Aug, 2018, 6:03 pm
re: *wheeze* wow thank you so much !! that means the world to me, man hhhh
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your art is amazing as well !! :o
22 Aug, 2018, 6:04 pm
sh!t that's deep, i love it.
23 Aug, 2018, 9:28 pm
DEEP- I liked it ;0;
24 Aug, 2018, 10:03 pm
Re: ATOLKGVP THANKS I GUESS ;0;