#Athen2 "Now take these berries," Athens said, putting some blueish red fruit in Two's bag of few rations. "You need to only eat one every few days since they have a large amount of energy in 'em, but I must warn you- The pheromones(sp?) in that suround are stronger, so avoid eating them all in one day!" She said and laughed as Two's eyes kept looking over at the pocket where they were stored. However, this moment felt bittersweet for Athens. -c-
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19 Aug, 2012, 2:15 am
Sure the stallion would be out of her mane, but she felt like an actor saying the same lines. While the attraction to berries was true, their effects were almost opposite to her description. They slowly shut down the body until the victim was dead, She learned that the hard way. Athens quickly shook her head out of her thoughts and barked at Two to get running already. He wouldn't get get to /his/ home. He'd probably send in reinforcements and that would be no good.
19 Aug, 2012, 2:23 am
As she watched the lanky stalliln gallop off, she remembered that warm season was going to end. Ah, she loved the cold, but food is bit more shy to show up when the ground is frozen. "I guess it's time fer our own departure, eh?" she said to Theodore, who was lazily chewing on a spoon. She smiled warmly at him as his ears perked and he raised his head. The only one she could truely trust.
19 Aug, 2012, 2:33 am
She spent the next few hours packing her bag. She left most of the food inside the roots of the tree- once it got cold the tree would act like a huge freezer. Athens mostly focused on finding small containers to fill with water. Water would soon become a precious thing on her journey. And soon enough the twins would be passing through so she had to hurry!
19 Aug, 2012, 2:47 am
Now she was running outside the forest scanning the hilly land in front of her. Ha! /There they are!/ she thought seeing two tall figures in the distance. "Hey! Wait for me!" She could feel Theo's claws digging into her mane to make sure he wouldn't fly off. The two stopped and waited for Athens to catch up and catch her breath. "Ah welcome Athena! Still don't got a cutie mark?" the male greeted warmly. "Yeah, and the names Athens! You should remeber by now West!" Athens said and playfully shoved him. Yes, her real is Athena, but it was too 'feminine' for her tastes and slight change felt more natural. "Nice to see you still live an' kickin'!" the female said grinning and raising an eyebrow.
19 Aug, 2012, 2:53 am
Awesome storeh! I like it!
19 Aug, 2012, 3:07 am
The Twins didn't look that similar, but they were /tall./ She was sure both of them could look Princess Luna straight in the eyes if they ever met. West rose his head up and let out a soothing bass note. Now Athens wasn't the best singer but alto notes she could manage. The female- Zaria lastly joined in with soft sopranos. Their hooves starte to march themselves towards civilization and their voices filed the empty moorland with forgotten stories.
19 Aug, 2012, 3:13 am
-done- Reference used since I suck at sunset/sunrise backgrounds Dx
19 Aug, 2012, 10:46 am
Thank you very much! ^^
19 Aug, 2012, 1:26 pm
This really is very lovely! Both the story and the art have been a pleasure to see. Will you be doing more? Please?
19 Aug, 2012, 4:38 pm
I agree with bman! I get so pulled into the detail of the story. Ur really good at storytelling. I also really like the sunset!
19 Aug, 2012, 11:20 pm
Oh I am, this sorta' like the end of chapter one. Also, I'll totally read your story if you start it! :D