Cool design, but her abdomen is way too long. Her hips are also narrower than her thighs, which happens sometimes but looks really weird. Also, the gap between her legs is too wide. The end result of all this makes her look like her lower body is slowly melting and pulling away, like a G.I.Joe held over a fire. I know that's a pretty rough critique, but you say this isn't the final draft, so you can still improve her! I reccomend you check out Eschergirls on Tumblr, not just to see where you're going wrong, but how to fix it and maybe get some design ideas.

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