Cali by -Vivie-
This took forever and I'm still not 100 percent on the background
I really hope my followers actually notice this, it took litterally like 10 hours-
#SLthisisnoice
Cali's a fun and friendly girl, but she's a bit isolated in the Ice Zeharu world and values her alone time.
A critique would be nice please :,)
#BHZeharu #CalidaSL #dragon #ice #cute? #cool
I have yet to master scales, but its a start :,D
Zeharus are so challenging I love it hahah
I forgot her icy-neck spikes but that's okay! I still love it
ALSO AAAH GOLD STAR O V E R N I G H T?!?! YESSSS #SLGOLD
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14 Apr, 2018, 3:57 am
Nise job! looks pretty and cool! I also love the shading! ^^
14 Apr, 2018, 3:58 am
*nice
oops I typed "nise"
14 Apr, 2018, 8:17 am
aaCK this is fricking amazing--
how do you even spend so long on paintings my maximum is 6 hours wth
also no critique right now becase my head isn't in the right place
14 Apr, 2018, 11:12 pm
Oh wow! You're getting better and better every time!
She looks so gorgeous in your style, I love the scale details, very nice.
My suggestion?
The moonlight hitting the ice on her and the ground could be more sparkly/vibrant. (Canadian here, we live in snow x'D)
Especially on the parts of her body (ice) touched by the moonlight, you could have light shine through her ice and leave light spots on the ground. And work on shiny/sheen tricks.
Since it's night time, don't be afraid to use black for shading/make some areas (especially cave tunnels) pitch black. Also work on her shadow, the moonlight would cause her shadow to stretch out a bit from her angle, towards the right of the picture.
All in all, I live by, get bold and crazy with it. Don't be afraid to shade darkly, make certain areas pitch black or play with reflections and light.
Also the further her body strays from the front (like how her tail is more in the background), you can include minimal detailing. Find a focal point to your character, for example, her face. Detail her face and work on drawing a viewers eye to her face, that way people won't notice minimal detail on her tail.
The best explanation I've got for that would be Soryn ( #BHOCSoryn, third most recent) if you look at his tail, you'll notice faded/lack of detail. But the front of his body and his face draws people to that.
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I rambled, but I hope this can help you in any way xP
14 Apr, 2018, 11:16 pm
Also you could try putting her tail in one of the tunnels, Zeharu are long and twirly. The further her tail gets away from her head, you can make the spikes and tail fluff smaller.
(I could always do a drawing if you'd prefer, I'd like to challenge myself to some icy tricks and you can use whatever you want from it to help you)
15 Apr, 2018, 10:27 am
that is sooo cute
16 Apr, 2018, 9:12 pm
Oooooooh this looks really pretty! <3 Amazing job with the details and colors!