Bronzestar REF Remake by YoCorn

#Cats #Cat #Warriors #Kit #Apprentice #Warrior #Deputy #Leader #StarClan #Mother #Mate #Tabby #Burn #Scars #Ambereyes #Injured #ForestClan

Bronzekit was born to warriors, Sheepfur and Oaktail. Bronzekit was the runt of thelitter of two and was born much smaller than the average cat. Although she was small, her courage and kindness made up for it. As an apprentice, Bronzepaw was very eager to learn. But that eagerness led her and her mentor, Foxtail to a forest fire. (To be continued...)

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13 Apr, 2018, 4:46 pm
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YoCorn

13 Apr, 2018, 5:08 pm

While trying to put it out, Bronzepaw caught on fire. Luckily, she was saved in time by Foxtail. Bronzepaw was then forced to recover in the medicine cat den for many moons. Foreststar visited her and explained to her how it would be regretful to lose warrior she could become. Afterwards, Bronzepaw spent all her time training much harder, hoping she'd catch up to all she had missed when recovering. Her brother, Rabbitpaw, loyally stayed with her and waited to become a warrior until she was ready as well. Once a warrior, Bronzerabbit recieved her first apprentice, Toadpaw. Bronzerabbit trained hard to be a great mentor but he was very disrespectful and refused anything from her. Soon after her aprentice became a warrior, she wanted kits. Mudfoot, an elder at the time, willingly offered to be the father. Bronzerabbit gave birth to two kits, a she-cat named, Bearkit and a tom named, Cavekit. (To be continued...)

YoCorn

13 Apr, 2018, 5:14 pm

After her kits became warriors, a rogue clan attacked. And her Bearclaw lost her life in a fatal accident. Bronzerabbit was hurt deeply by this but it seemed to have affected her son, Caveshadow, most of all. After that, dogs seemed to attack constantly. Bronzerabbit took it upon herself to lead one, very large one, away from camp. She climbed a tree but the dog grabbed her leg. But before it could be extremely wounded, her ex apprentice, Toadleg, attacked the dog and instead was killed. Bronzerabbit deputy after the death of Foreststar. She often would leave for days only to bring back large amounts of prey. (To be continued...)

YoCorn

13 Apr, 2018, 5:15 pm

(I forgot to mention she had a second apprentice a couple moons after she left the nursery)

YoCorn

13 Apr, 2018, 5:22 pm

Even though the dog attack had caused her to limp, Bronzerabbit was a strong deputy. She ended up finding out that the cause of the dog attacks was from Caveshadow. She confronts him and tells him this isn't a the right thing to do. They argue but still are very close. After many moons, Bronzerabbit begins to build up the camp. Foxstar was on her last life and Bronzerabbit was in fear of losing her closest friend. As she was building, Caveshadow called her name and Bronzerabbit saw a dog coming after her. She prepared to fight back but Foxstarjumped in... Killing the dog... and herself. Foxstar's death was one of the hardest things for Bronzestar. And she fell into a deep depression. (To be continued...)

YoCorn

13 Apr, 2018, 5:31 pm

Bronzestar led her clan into a new, denser, forest territory. Even if some clan members were reluctant to leave, she felt it was best. Bronzestar and a few others escorted Mudfoot to the old territory for his final resting place. Bronzestar died moons later. She wondered away from camp, only to be followed by a one of the new warriors, Featherwing. Featherwing was very curious as to what her leader was doing but kept her company. Bronzestar walked to the old camp where she sat just outside the camp and explained that this had been where Foxstar died and she wanted to die in the same place. Bronzestar requested Featherwing to tell Redstar the truth about Caveshadow but to be forgiving as she knows there's a true, honest, brave warrior inside. Featherwing agrees and comforts her leader. Bronzestar asked Featherwing to strike her down. And as she died she explained to Featherwing that she had darkness awaiting and to be careful. It was then that Foxstar and Bearclaw greeted her to StarCla

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