Visitors by Prometheus

Short story time!
On a planet called #Cherren, there were 5 descendants from the planet's finest warriors: ( From left to right ) #Pulsara, #Alula, #Galtea, #Milmi, and #Amaris. As descendants from the warriors, they would lend a hand to other planets should trouble occur. ( cont. )

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17 Mar, 2018, 1:13 am
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Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 1:29 am

However, there was a terror that struck fear into many people.. the Galaxy Beast. Once it finds a planet it fancies, it latches on, and begins to drain away its energy... Until there's nothing left but a cold husk. D:
But Galtea ( the leader ) was determined to go put it it down, for Cherren, and all the other planets out there.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 1:49 am

Pulsara ( The engineer of the group ), along with a couple of other engineers created a planetary defense barrier to keep the Galaxy Beast out. If it proved successful, they'd give their inentention to other planets.
One day, the beast came, and it began to attack! It seemed that that barrier was doing fine, until... A crackling noise was heard. A long split began forming along the barrier from the excessive banging.
Quickly, the engineers began to tend to the systems, trying to fix any, and every problem.
However, the girls were ordered to flee. Galtea refused, for she wanted to protect them.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 2:01 am

But the people told them they wouldn't be any use to them dead. They should find another planet, and try to see if there were any more advanced weapons that could help stave the beast off.
As much as she didn't want to, she knew they were right. Galtea had Pulsara find the fastest ship they could, and Amaris ( the geologist/spaceologist/navigator ) to plot a course.
As soon as they were on, Plusara fired the engines, and they boosted away. The Galaxy Beast caught wind of the ship, and gave chase! As you can imagine, it was real scary. D':
Pulsara did her best to dodge incoming attacks, but they got nicked a couple of times. Finally, they lost it in an asteroid field.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 2:13 am

Everything was smooth sailing, until Milmi noticed a flashing light.
"That stupid lunkhead damaged our feul tanks!", she huffed, but that was the least of their problems.. With feul running out, they had to find a planet to land on. Fast.
Fortunately, Amaris spotted a blue planet, and suggested they quickly make their way there, but slowly. Any faster and they'd burn through the rest of their feul.
So Pulsara cautiously eased her way towards the planet. They just needed to clear the atmospehere, and they'd be golden... until... *Sputter sputter*!

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 2:26 am

"Oh no...", Alula shuddered. *Sputter*! "C'mon baby, don't die on me now..", Pulsara pleaded. And then, the noise stopped. ..And so did the ship. Acting instantly, Galtea hit the emergency impact button, and they all fastened in as the ship plummeted towards the ground!
With a huge crash, they landed. The 5 staggered out, dazed, but alive.
"A-Amaris, can you tell us what planet is this?", Galtea asked, holding her head.
Amaris looked around, and studied the grass. "I believe this is Earth. I've heard the inhabitants are a little hostile here, so extreme caution is advised... But on the other hand, isn't this breeze lovely"? :D

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 2:44 am

And so, they made their way to a nearby city. On the way, Milmi spotted what looked to be a hotel, and the group went in. At the desk was some guy in glasses. He took one look at them, and his mouth dropped. "( Oh wow, hot cosplayers!! )", he thought.
Galtea, being the leader, stepped up to the desk and tried to ask him for lodging. But you see, they spoke in Cherrenese.
"Huh... Doesn't look like he knows our language. Amaris, could you get our translator bracelets"?
"No need, Gal. Look at his face. I think he'd harrass us if we stayed", Milmi groaned.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 2:55 am

After a while, it got dark, and they had wandered far off from the city. This time, Alula spotted a lone house, which looked to be uninhabited.
"Ha, alright! Let's just stay here for the night! No one would stay in this place", Milmi exclaimed.
Before Pulsara could say how bad of an idea that was, Milmi had already jimmied the lock, and opened the door. .-.
"If no one stays here, why was the door locked, foam-brain?", she asked, facepalming.
They snuck up the stairs, and was greeted by a small round puffy creature with a red nose. Alula fell head-over-heels for it, and began cuddling it. :'D
"H-hey! Don't just pick up strange creatures!", Pulsara whispered, but she may as well been talking to a brickwall.
Galtea peered in the room the creature came out of, and her eyes widened.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 3:25 am

Someone was sleeping in the bed! The others followed and were awfully curious as to who stayed here. Milmi bit her tongue as she gently pulled back the covers. Pulsara and Galtea kept waving their hands, and mouthing "No", but it was a bit too late. The person unbeknownst to them, was actually P2. :o
"This Earthling is going to be so upset if he catches us in here, let's go!", Pulsara whispered.
"Lighten up, Pulsi, he doesn't look dangerous at all", Milmi whined.
Galtea leaned in and poked his cheek, then the other. "His face is pretty squishy. Hee, I can make his lips pucker", she snickered.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 3:38 am

The other 4 started snickering as well, and were trying to hold back laughs. :'D Suddenly, P2 eyes slowly opened, and focused in on Galtea as she was laughing. o-o He involuntarily yelped, which caused all the others to scream, and huddle in the corner of the room.
"W-who are you, and what are you d-doing in my house!?", he stammered.
Galtea tried to answer, but again, the language barrier. :'D This time, Amaris had the tranlation bracelets ready.
"L-look, I know this looks bad, but, er...", she began. "We come in peace!", Amaris chimed in. The others groaned.

Prometheus

17 Mar, 2018, 3:52 am

Galtea calmly told him that they crash-landed on Earth, and just needed a place to stay. P2 was kind of hesistant, mainly cuz his friend Jack would make some... "comment" about it. But Milmi pulled out the whole 'big teary eyes' bit. XD So for that night, P2 let them stay in the guest room. :'] Little did he know he was going on space adventure later on. :O

This was another memorable comic from my time on Miiverse. :D Hope you guys liked it!

Taco-San

17 Mar, 2018, 5:10 am

Nice. That was hilarious. xD
This reminds me of a story I've had in my head for a few years. I should draw my characters so we can compare. Lol. :P

ShihouxAdventure

17 Mar, 2018, 12:31 pm

That was fun to read threw.

//Re: Oh boy, I know what I'm going to try working on.

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