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At the very least, attempt to comment something. #Shira

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
15 Feb, 2018, 1:51 pm
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EmblemMoon

15 Feb, 2018, 2:06 pm

Your art is cute, but it wouldn’t hurt to try making your characters look more realistic. It’s appealing for Chibi enthusiasts, but some people probably don’t understand what chibi art is like.

Woshotaii

15 Feb, 2018, 3:07 pm

More shading could do the trick, otherwise I think it looks very good. No need to say, "improve on anatomy" since it's clear that you're already improving on it

cowboy

15 Feb, 2018, 3:17 pm

maybe you can try working on anatomy, your anatomy is really good right now but anatomy can be very detailed

mattuky

15 Feb, 2018, 3:20 pm

Perhaps you should try other styles and less character design
or change the shape of yours charaters´ anathomy

Haiiro

15 Feb, 2018, 4:08 pm

When in doubt, try and copy a random manga or comic artstyle. It not only challenges you to do new things, but often sheds new light on other drawing techniques.

Pooky

15 Feb, 2018, 4:24 pm

maybe try shading with different colors for a more vibrant effect or texture.
i often look at @mag7gio @ladyama and @lulura art for shading and color effects techniques.

-Vivie-

15 Feb, 2018, 6:22 pm

Hmm. Well, I do love your art, but maybe worl on developing more of a unique style? Your shading is great in my opinion, but for the lineart it's all very anime-ish, which don't get me wrong, I love anime-style, but I do see it a bit often in other artists too, so maybe just try to set yourself apart from the other artists that do a similar style by your characters or changing the eyes a bit or something. I do love your art though, I really do.

ValiToast

15 Feb, 2018, 6:35 pm

First of all: Im sorry if the English is misspelled...I translate in Google translator :D
I like your style! But I want more independent full images that leave an impression on my own! Maybe its whats missing. Not shading, detail or so missing.. Thats all perfekt! Like Anime :3
An example of what i mean are perhaps the artists "garasya" or "infini u-nami" (here on Colors 3d). So not just character designs! They are so beautiful and cool - dont get me wrong (would also like to have one o.o ) but such pictures that stand alone and speak for themselve are maybe more interesting than which the maybe only show a new charakter :3 without a joke - in your charakterstyle i wish me a complete anime x3

tabletown

15 Feb, 2018, 6:37 pm

The only thing I think you need to work on is maybe more realistic shading, but that’s about it! <3

Faye_Lynx

15 Feb, 2018, 7:10 pm

In an attempt to help...
trying a different style could work, or maybe using different colors while shading?

I really love the art you make, so I hope this helps

Manga-Soul

15 Feb, 2018, 8:22 pm

try drawing scenery just scenery ^w^

WxDragonGhoulxB

15 Feb, 2018, 9:35 pm

What about different/more extreme eye expressions? Your eyes are very well drawn, but a lot of the time they look unamused.

Fortunata

15 Feb, 2018, 10:17 pm

there's no "real" way to make your art attractive since everyone has varying views of what they find pleasant

but if its smth thats bothering you id suggest expirementing
with coloring, different facial features, and body types.

I think male anatomy is something you could improve on but it isnt bad. Figure studies usually helps with understanding anatomy as well as seeing how people have different bodies so again theres no wrong way to draw a body, it just has to be proportionate

coloring,,, is a bit more complicated since it depends on what you're going for?? I see you use one base and like 2-3 undertones. Realism uses shades from all around the color spectrum for undertones but also uses "muddy colors" to bring out other colors and thats honestly all i know about that,,,,

as for varying facial features if you want to get out of the ani,e-esque style,,, uhhh its just something you need to study with photos of real people from different ethnicities.

Fortunata

15 Feb, 2018, 10:18 pm

i genuinely think you made your anime style your own tbh but if its really bothering you that much i hope i helped,,,

Crimson-Moonfall

16 Feb, 2018, 4:08 pm

maybe you just need a break from the usual stuff :y try out some backgrounds or more dynamic posing. you've probably fallen into the state that I have where you keep getting frustrated that you're not getting better and just don't feel like doing anything at all. Even if that's not the case Shi Shi try to learn something knew to get that brain of yours to give you some happy vibes when you learn that new thing. :y

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