ChristmEevs Special: Snowed In - 1 by ShinyEevs

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Status: Ready for reading and comments!
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Inspired by all of the Hallowitzkes. I'll try working on this if I get the chance to. ^^"

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
14 Dec, 2017, 12:52 am
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ShinyEevs

14 Dec, 2017, 1:00 am

Our story starts in a secluded cabin in the middle of a snowstorm... why is this the setting? Well, our cast of characters decided to spend an over-nighter in it to get an old-timey feeling. And then the snow came, which trapped them in the cabin with only a few supplies.
Things were not working out so well. Everyone except Seren and Eevs had caught a sudden cold due to the temperature outside. By this point, they were the only ones able to do chores, much to their disappointment.
It was two days before Christmas, and all through the house everyone was sneezing except for the healthy ones. Seren prepared breakfast (which at this point was mush and frozen snow) in the morning, and Eevs was distributing medicine throughout the entire sickness population.
"This overnighter was a mistake," Zaried huffed, his shell cracking. "Even I can't find warmth in this egg!"
"Hoho, we finally get to see what Pokemon he is... a real treat!" Quota exclaimed.
"S-Shut up!"

ShinyEevs

14 Dec, 2017, 1:07 am

"LISTEN TO THE EGG OR ELSE I'LL WHACK YOU WITH THE PANS!!" Seren yelled from across the cabin.
"Sheesh, we can hear you just fine..." the fox-alien-thing muttered.
Audrii started crying and spraying everyone with her stunning powder.
"Oh no! It's a catastrophe! RUN!!" Beth jumped up only to land on her face.
"Quota, this is all your fault! Now everyone's gonna be paralyzed!!" Eevs exclaimed.
"Me?! Blame that on SOMEONE THAT'S MISSING!!"
Everyone stopped and looked around.
"Come to think of it, where is EXE?" Naomi wondered.
"Probably doing something that's going to result in a weird story on Colors..." Beth yawned and fell asleep.
"AAAAH! NOW YOU GUYS ARE BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL!!" shouted Seren, with multiple whacks of the pan aimed at Quota's head.
"Hey! Quit it! My beautiful head--!" Quota sneezed and whimpered.
"Brother, please." Heredity, his sister, sneezed as well, but held his shoulder. "Seren, stop this ****."
"HE'S RUINING MY COOKING!!!"
"It's just mush..." Zaried muttered.

ShinyEevs

14 Dec, 2017, 1:15 am

"Heredity swears?! What?!" Eevs said. "Now, all of you. Quit your bickering. Maybe we should tell Christmas stories to pass the time..."
"Yay, Christmas stories!!" Beth rose up, cheered and was awarded with a few whacks from Seren's pan.
"BETH... I SWEAR TO ARCEUS... SHUT THE [censored :3] UP..." Seren muttered.
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Meanwhile, at an unknown place...
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EXE was heading somewhere dark, passing through corridors. We're not entirely sure why, but this is a story, so just deal with it.
She spotted a familiar figure in the distance and went up to it. Now, before revealing him, some of you guys know him as the main antagonist of #alternateuniversecomic, but...
"Charm.EXE. How nice to see you here," EXE called out. "Should we wreck their Christmas at the cabin?"
"Yeah, sure, fine." he muttered, facing the other direction. "I have a brilliant plan, too..."

ShinyEevs

14 Dec, 2017, 1:16 am

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Cliffhanger! The part's done for now.
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ShinyEevs

14 Dec, 2017, 1:17 am

(I was lazy for now but I needed to establish the story. lol)

Witzke

14 Dec, 2017, 1:27 am

OMG, we have three stories going on! ('xcept mines a Halloween one.) This is so cool! xD

Wow, this is an intense way to start a vacation. And if this is just the start, I wonder what's going to happen throughout! And Zaried might hatch! That is a Christmas miracle

Will this experience help everybody bond? Or will everyone be sick of each other? Or will everyone get actually sick? OR WILL EVERYONE DIE O-O

Looking forward to what happens next! : D

"Don't worry! The saws are on the way!"
"Yaaaaay!"
-Idiot Box, Spongebob

Bowpmsas

14 Dec, 2017, 11:22 pm

What a neat story so far! I'll be sure to read the next parts when they come, Beth. ; D

The_Basement_Guy

16 Dec, 2017, 8:42 pm

"Snowed In"

hm.....

"Snowed InN"

oh shi-

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