Aurora by -Vivie-

Edit- I forgot the gems underneath her eye!! Sorry D: If I won her, I'd be sure to draw her with them

just love Zeharus, and this one is especially pretty! I'm super proud of this- Even if it took me like, all day to get it done XD

Name- Aurora (Rora for short)
Age- 342
Length- 180m
She'd be young, kind, and have a big heart, and her favorite hobby would be flying up in the auroras- though she's still quite into herself XD

This is like, my new pfp I'm so happy with it, like ohhhmigosh.

I really hope I win her, but best of luck to the other contestants! :D

#BHZeharu #BHZeharuDTA #Slthisisnoice

I can't believe I actually drew this.. Wow. If you can't tell, I'm super happy with it lol. Thanks for all your critiques to help me grow as an artist! I'd be nowhere without you guys, fr lol

That being said..

Critique please?

#Slgold- ANOTHER?? I love you guys ;o;

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
29 Nov, 2017, 5:00 am
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BloodHybrid

29 Nov, 2017, 6:14 am

Ah wow she's beautiful! Awesome job Vivie!
Thank you for entering, make sure you include this though

Name: (Up to you)
Age: (Up to you)
Gender: Female
Length: (Up to you, can't be more than 210m)
Variant: Ice

To complete your entry.

Critique?
You seemed to lose her body in the twists and bends. I suggest go for more simple poses and work your way up to more complex ones, once you get a hang of bending and following the natural flow of their long bodies.

Her whiskers were also difficult to spot and should attach closer to her nostrils, don't feel shy about using more darker shading to define her as well. For example, my latest drawing of #BHOCSoryn, I went bold and risky with the shading and it paid off. Take some risks with your shading and lighting! That can go for all drawings, the bolder you get with poses, shading, lighting, backgrounds, etc... You'll find yourself improving in no time!

Her arms here are also two different sizes, I suggest taking a bit more time measuring them out, so they're even or if you're new to this. Just focus on one arm, keep the other hidden until you're comfortable with it.

This was a lot of rambling, I'm sorry and I hope I was somewhat helpful, I've helped tutor artists on here before. So if there's anything you want to ask, ask!

BloodHybrid

29 Nov, 2017, 7:07 am

Re// I'm glad I can help! (I actually helped @GuineaPig too with her art). You can do up to 3 entries/Zeharu.

And don't worry about it, it's not even December yet, you have plenty of time to do more entries. Take your time, there isn't any rush, I can always extend dates too.

I'm not the greatest at lineless work, and it's 2 am for me. I might be able to help later on. But I'm tired right now x)

romeojamais

29 Nov, 2017, 7:10 am

gorgeous

Draco-Felis

29 Nov, 2017, 9:36 am

critique?? uM weeell, one leg is a LOT thinner than the other and it looks a bit off

but aside from that (and the 3d on the falling snow looking a bit flat - maybe put some snow on other layers, so it looks like they're everywhere?) I honestly can't think of anything else.
this is incredible *0*

Draco-Felis

29 Nov, 2017, 9:39 am

Whoops
Blood already commented on the legs/arms

/butyeahijustnoticedihavenoideawhereherbodygoes-/

SpiralingUpward

29 Nov, 2017, 11:24 am

re: Thank you!
This looks so beautiful!! The northern lights idea is so unique! Goodluck! as for critique ideas... like @blood said her arms look like they're two different sizes, and the only other thing i see is that her snout is a little pointy, maybe try to round it a bit. But the looks amazing and i wish you luck in the contest :)

OneOfAKind__

29 Nov, 2017, 7:18 pm

Amazingly Gorgeous! :) God Bless!

Draco-Felis

29 Nov, 2017, 9:41 pm

re: aAA YES FRIEND FRAND!!

and don't worry about it!! you don't have to if you're not in the m0od!

Draco-Felis

29 Nov, 2017, 9:42 pm

'm0od'
x'DD

RanchRobin

01 Dec, 2017, 8:13 pm

Re: 14th but its fine! You don't have to! :3

LadyWinter

01 Dec, 2017, 9:56 pm

He is really cute
re: thank you. I am glad that you like the dragon

SpiralingUpward

02 Dec, 2017, 6:53 pm

re: Thank you!!

Zephyra-Animations

02 Dec, 2017, 9:06 pm

You will be TomTheDragon1988’s Secret Santa!

Their request is:
The only OC I have is #TomtheDragon1988. I'm sure it'll be fun!

When you finish drawing the request, please comment or email “COMPLETE” on either DragoDraws’ or Zephyra-Animations’ Secret Santa post (or emails), so we can mark you as finished with the drawing. You need to complete the drawing by the 17th of December! Then, hold onto the drawing, and post it on the 25th or 26th of December. When you post your drawing, remember to go to TomTheDragon1988’s gallery and let them know that you were their Secret Santa, and to come see the drawing you made for them! Don't forget to add the tag #DDSSZA in the description of your painting!

FadingGlory

03 Dec, 2017, 11:51 pm

This is gorgeous!! I love the pose and mane! :)

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