aaayes you have improved!!!?? :00

critique? hm
i'll say that... uh?? the lines on the left ear are kinda wobbly but i shouldn't be talking i can't get straight lines myself---
and (if the light source is directly to the right) the red lighting should also be on the underside of the leg she's holding up as it can still be reached by the light? i dunno
gosh i suck at this

also i'm wearing a crochet bowtie right now so that's nice

re: rip ;-;
my sister likes hp but she probably wouldn't join?
heck
we're lonely x'D

but you can never draw too much hp stuff-

Aa, If you're okay with me giving a bit of criticism, I'd like to point out that I can't really tell if the red is from a light source or is a shadow. If it's from a source, It doesn't work to well here, because the value of the red is darker that the character. And since red itself has a darker value, it wouldn't work to well to make it lighter.
If it's a shadow, It looks a bit out of place because there isn't a notable light source and it's rather bright for a shadow hh

tl;dr : You're colour theory and values is a little off and just needs a bit of work. Sycra has some rlly good tutorials for some of this stuff, and I'd like to recommend his video "Going from Grayscale to Colour". It has a lot of info about colour values °<°!!

RE: YES YES YES CAN YOU START YOUR PART SO WE CAN MAYBE GET IT DONE TODAY?? ILL BE ON MY DS ONCE I FINISH MY LOAD OF HOMEWORK

soRRY FOR LATE REPLY BUt you can do whatever you want!! just make sure theres room for me to do whatever i have to :0

re: aaah thank xD

other re: it is
you can get it on steam and also on the official website
you should take a look at it sometime

also i feel so proud,,
i just contacted the colors staff to report someone >:D