Critique My Art by DeadlyVenus

So just a little thing I wanted to ask you guys about. I’m not sure whether I’ve done this before or not. Anyways I wanted to ask what you guys like or dislike about my art, things I can improve on, stuff like that. I know the difference between critique and an insult do not test me hahaha

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
18 Oct, 2017, 10:45 pm
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Alkaline

18 Oct, 2017, 11:44 pm

While things like anatomy, I find always need improvement, with every artist there always improving I guess could say. I love you clean lineart style I love how sharp it is. Maybe try a bit more perspective? Trying out new and different expressions an avoid same face syndrome. (These are kind of just tips for artists in general)
Don't be afraid to go out of your confort to try new things. You already have a really neat linerart style so who knows what future you have with this one. I bet you can make something that'll really inspire others! ;)

Alkaline

18 Oct, 2017, 11:49 pm

Blep welp,I hope my advice helps, (even though I'm not very good at it

wolfapplepancake

19 Oct, 2017, 1:04 am

i think the back legs need a bit of improvement. they looked squished

HaazelNut

19 Oct, 2017, 3:28 pm

Idk, I like your art !

Alkaline

19 Oct, 2017, 4:47 pm

Re: Np, I'm glad I could help! :D

redscribbles

20 Oct, 2017, 10:13 am

re//ah sorry for the late response but id love to do that at if your still up for it! just tell me what one of your bois you want me to do! ^^

redscribbles

21 Oct, 2017, 1:41 am

hey finished the at!
tell me what tags you want boi ^^

redscribbles

21 Oct, 2017, 3:57 am

re//sorry for replying a lot but thanks its np! i actually had fun while doing it ^^ oh and take your time i dont want to rush you!

HaazelNut

21 Oct, 2017, 12:20 pm

Re : Ohw, don't worry ahah, you didn't take so long ^^
Ahah, that's just the truth I rlly like your art, it's so pretty !
Oh, really ? Am I one of your inspirations ? Gosh, idk how to react xD Of course I'm happy but I didn't think I would be part of someone's inspiration :')

Jo-Kai Gon-Zo

21 Oct, 2017, 11:13 pm

I don't know what to negatively say about your art, I honestly think your art is improving!

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