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So! I finally got far enough into White Egret where I'm comfortable publishing it online. It is curently around 110k words, halfway done or so. I was also holding off before because I considered publishing it for money...and realized it's basically unmarketable haha. It's too long to be a single, its plot structure doesn't allow it to be split in two, its concept is unconventional but not considered "high concept"...it goes on. [cont.]
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18 Oct, 2017, 9:59 pm
But anyways now it's finally available! *yay* I've been working on it since I was 13, and have constantly been rewriting it since (lol). But now you can read the stories behind all of my characters if you want. Critiques are VERY welcomed. Don't hold back because of hurt feelings or whatever haha. Also if you see inconsistencies, even minor ones, while reading, please point them out! There are some areas that I've rewritten or restructured, and sometimes the old work shows through where they should've been removed...point them out if you see them!
18 Oct, 2017, 10:03 pm
As for warnings, there is blood, fighting and violence but not to an extreme degree. There is no swearing or sexual themes/language. If it were a movie it might be PG-13 but it can be flexed I suppose.
18 Oct, 2017, 10:11 pm
Summary: 300 years ago, the land of Rumana was terrorized by creatures called Beasts. The leader of the Beasts was a massive six-winged dragon dubbed the White Egret. When the warrior Amaros somehow slew the White Egret, all Beasts disappeared. Rumana has experienced peace and prosperity ever since. However, that peace is currently being threatened. The Empress Mersekah is encroaching on Rumana's land, for reasons deeper than a lust for territory. Soon, the nation's lost history will rise to the surface, and reveal the true nature of Beasts.
18 Oct, 2017, 10:16 pm
You might like White Egret if you like high fantasy, adventures, magic, anti-villians/moral gray, a wide cast of characters, dragons, and other mythical creatures. You also might like it if you're simply curious about my characters :'D (you also might like it if you are sick of the chosen one/orphaned protagonist haha...)
If you have any questions, ask!!
Also for non-Wattpad users, you don't have to be a member to read it.
18 Oct, 2017, 10:39 pm
This sounds interesting! I'll definitely have a look whenever I have the time.
(I also know the feeling of writing something that you can't publish because it's too long or unmarketable. XD)
18 Oct, 2017, 11:42 pm
Oooh, it sounds awesome!! I'll check it out if I can find the time! x)
18 Oct, 2017, 11:49 pm
Omigosh! Awesomeness! I have heard of Wattpad! I will have to download it now so I can read this! You have succeeded where I have not xD I have a mountains worth of spiral binders chocked full of my short stories and movie script ideas. This is inspiring me to try and do more with my works! >3<
19 Oct, 2017, 1:59 am
It's very interesting so far and your word choice is impeccable. Can't wait to read more tomorrow!
19 Oct, 2017, 9:03 am
I must say, this sounds exactly like the sort of thing I'd like to read. Plus, I'm already pretty invested in your characters.
I would like to point out that while I'm by no means a professional, I'd love to give it a read and see what advice I may have to offer...though since you're obviously dedicated to the work and are very articulate, I doubt there's much I could give. XD
19 Oct, 2017, 2:47 pm
*Runs In Through Da Door* I need to read it!!! I've been looking around for a story for a awhile... I've already read almost all of the classics in my bookshelf. U . U) /
19 Oct, 2017, 5:51 pm
Wow, that sounds really intruiging! I'm really happy for you! And, you have been writing it since you were 13 :O Are you kidding me?! That's when I started writing mine! Wow, that is so cool. I wish I could show off mine, but I'm not at that point yet. I think you are older than me though
19 Oct, 2017, 8:18 pm
Oms, I need to read this
19 Oct, 2017, 10:10 pm
I just finished and it’s so good. Can’t wait for the next installment!
19 Oct, 2017, 10:28 pm
Sounds interesting. I'll check it out some time.
20 Oct, 2017, 8:06 am
I am so happy for you and it sounds wonderful! :) God Bless!
20 Oct, 2017, 12:25 pm
!!! I'll read it when I have time!!
05 Nov, 2017, 1:02 pm
Re: Thank you so much!! I must give the credit to @GuineaPig24 though, since she designed it. >u<
12 Nov, 2017, 10:13 am
From the summary of this story, I'm quite interested so I'll be sure to read it when I have time!
03 Jul, 2022, 4:41 am
it's not there