Hallowitzke Mini #1 by Witzke

BOO! Here is the first Hallowitzke Mini! For this one, Peekatchu will be telling the story. How it will work is I will write the story in the comments. I really hope you guys will like Peekatchu's story. Just remember though, ot IS Peekatchu xD So, you may not be spooked. Well, I hope you will all enjoy! : D

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Story Status: Ready For Reading!
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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
17 Oct, 2017, 10:27 pm
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Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:31 pm

Peekatchu: BOO! Hi everyone! It's Halloween, and I've got a atory I've been preparing for you! I hope it will be spooky! Well, not TOO spooky, cause then you would wet your pants, and that's just gross. Anyways, here comes the tale! Once upon a time---

Zoaruah: No one starts a scary story with once upon a time.

Peekatchu: Zoaruah?! What are you doing here?

Zoaruah: I'm just here to listen to how cheesy your story is. If anything will make it scary it will be how much cheese it has.

Peekatchu: Mmm, I like cheese, but you can't eat a story.

Zoaruah: Just get on with it.

Peekatchu: All right!

Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:38 pm

"Once upon a time, there was a spooky old cabin. One night, Zoaruah was walking through the woods and came across the old cabin."

Zoaruah: Hey, don't bring me into this!

"Zoaruah had been wandering around for like, three weeks, so he needed a place to rest. And he was afraid of the wild monsters that might be roaming the woods at this hour."

Zoaruah: Pffft.

"Zoaruah walked up to the old cabin and knicked on the door, but after waiting for three and a half hours, he got no response, so he went in anyways. Inside, the cabin was pitch black, it had bugs crawling around the walls and it smelled bad inside."

Zoaruah: No corpses? Geez, what a ripoff.

Peekatchu: Zoaruah, please just listen.

"Zoaruah was really tired, so he decided to lay down on the bed and take a nap. It was really uncomfortable though, so he didn't get into a deep sleep. Just a regular one."

Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:44 pm

"About five minutes later though, the wind started to pick up, and it flew the windows open, and he heard a loud moan! Zoaruah was frightened! He got up to shut the windows, and assumed that the moan was just the sound of the wind. But then, as he walked back to his bed, he heard a terrible noise..."

Zoaruah: *Arm pit farts*

Peekatchu: Zoaruah!!!

Zoaruah: Bwa hah ha!

"Ehem..He looked over at the refridgerator, and the door slowly opened. Zoaruah was terrified! The light from within the fridge glew ominously, and a ghost was revealed from within! 'Oooohhoooooooo' the ghost moaned! Zoaruah was terrified! Zoaruah fell onto his seat and was shaking like crazy! The ghost slowly approached him and began speaking to him, 'Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt....' Zoaruah assumed that it was going to say, 'Get Out,' So he ran for the door as fast as he could! He ran as far away from the Cabin as he could, which was like, ten feet.

Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:51 pm

"Zoaruah was panting. He thought he was in the clear, but when he looked back at the cabin, he saw the ghost slooowly phasing through the wall. Zoaruah ran another ten feet, but it was a really long ten feet! The wind was pushing against him, and he keot tripping on tree roots and bottle caps! The ghost however was not affected by the wind, and kept getting closer and closer to him. Zoaruah was completely out of breath at that point, and fell over. He couldn't handle all that exercise. But the Ghost could! The ghost approached Zoaruah, and Zoaruah was really scared. The Ghost then spoke again.
'Geeeeettttt......MIIIILLLLKKK.' Zoaruah then stopped covering his eyes. The Ghost then appologised to Zoaruah, 'I'm sorry for scaring you, I just like exaggerating mynsentences. I ran out of milk for my cereal bowl and I need some more. I would go to the store myself but ghosts aren't allowed to go into grocery stores.'

Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:54 pm

"Zoaruah then agreed to help the Ghost out with his horrifying problem, and the two quickly became best friends. Now, every Tuesday, Zoaruah goes to the old cabin and gives the Ghost a bottle of milk! The End!"

Zoaruah: BOOOOO!

Peekatchu: Ha ha, I inow, it was scary!

Zoaruah: No, BOOO, as in your story stunk! That was the worst Ghost story I ever heard, and I'd never be afraid of something that pathetic!

Ghost: BOOO!

Zoaruah: AAAAGGGH!!!

Ghost: *takes off sheet*

Charmandah: Got ya!

Zoaruah: Grr. I'll show you guys how to write a scary story, and it'll be the goruest, scariest story ever!

Charmandah: Sorry, I'm next in line for a story Zoaruah!

Zoaruah: Two bad stories in a row? I'm not sure the fans could handle that.

Witzke

17 Oct, 2017, 10:55 pm

THE END!

I hope you guys enjoyed the first Hallowitzke Mini! I hope Peekatchu gave you a good laugh, and maybe even a spook? cx Well, I hope you enjoyed! Commenting is now open.

Alternate_Universe

18 Oct, 2017, 3:29 am

Oh right! Hey witz, are you ever going to finish the next page of this comic?
-Johnny

Heishi

18 Oct, 2017, 1:45 pm

This was very enjoyable!
Lol, Miiiiiiiiilllk xD

Pooky

18 Oct, 2017, 5:10 pm

pfffffft, lol! XD

Bowpmsas

18 Oct, 2017, 9:30 pm

This was a fun read! I guess Zoaruah is jealous of Peekatchu's storytelling skills. CX

By the way Witzke, I did see your update pic and it's okay if Hallowitzke got delayed. Things happen in life, ya know. ; )

ShinyEevs

19 Oct, 2017, 10:11 am

GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET
exe's attention

lol xD

GiganLover_2000

20 Oct, 2017, 12:25 am

XD

Btw I just posted an ask and dare thing. :)

Penplat

22 Oct, 2017, 3:25 am

Three and a half hours is a long time to wait for someone to open a door! xD

That was a fun story! Can't wait to see what Charmandah's story is.

Astrogeon

25 Oct, 2017, 4:31 am

Look who's the scaredy cat now?
:P
I like how well put together the story was!

JayAndVolts

13 Dec, 2017, 3:50 am

Epic, I'd say.

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