"I'm not as cocky as I seem, I swear." by -Vivie-

Just Fai- First time drawing a full body of him.
It was fun getting in all the details! This wasn't what I wanted it to be exactly, but I'm still proud! #slthisisnoice
Any critiques?

#FaiSL #CupidDragon #shimmersocs

Gosh, I love Fai (and CDs in general) so much.

He's been through quite a bit.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
13 Oct, 2017, 12:46 am
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GuineaPig24

13 Oct, 2017, 1:16 am

This is lovely!!!

You’re one of the only people that still draws their Cupids :>

spaceywulf

13 Oct, 2017, 1:22 am

I DIDNT EVEN KNOW THIS WAS YOURS WHEN I SAW THE THUMBNAIL HECK???

RanchRobin

13 Oct, 2017, 1:54 am

SAME AS WULF SAID *o*

Draco-Felis

13 Oct, 2017, 8:30 am

AAAA this is GoRgEoUs heckkk
*o*

critique? hmmmmm
what's that little bit of shading on the hind leg that doesn't really follow the line? idk it might be intentional but eh
and the glow on the orange glowy things could be more smudged?
and use a bit of light grey and add a bit o texture to the moon
idk

CreamyPashy

13 Oct, 2017, 7:22 pm

ooooo nice job on this!!
oh uh ok :0
while cell shading is definitely a great method people use to shade, using black is always no-it can be use on black (like fur, colors) but then again you can make lighter colors to make the black look like shading, it's pretty better to use other colors like dark blue or purple
the same things with using white
and besides that there's little shading on his body at night it's get's really dark but the only parts that should be lighted would be his head, neck, a little of his left arm and areas around his glowing orbs
uhhh other than that I think that's it
I'm surprised, out of a lot of people only you still draw your cupid :o

Sheva

13 Oct, 2017, 7:31 pm

oooo this probably your best yet, there's definitely lot of improvement here hh You def should be proud °<°b

I fave part is def the face, and I love the composition.

For a Critique, the biggest problem I can see is with the general torso. It seems a little unstructured, as the hind legs are disproportionate to the front legs, and the elbows on the front legs are broken. A thing I've noticed is that the Legs and Arms on animals tend to follow the same "structural pattern" as humans, if that makes sense hh,,

Draco-Felis

13 Oct, 2017, 8:07 pm

good golly *LIGHTING on his hind leg

Jo-Kai Gon-Zo

14 Oct, 2017, 11:17 pm

This looks awesome, you've really outdone yourself with this drawing!

OneOfAKind__

15 Oct, 2017, 3:30 am

This is Beautiful! :) God Bless!

redscribbles

15 Oct, 2017, 6:21 pm

hECK BOI THIS IS REALLY PRETTY :00
re//ye friendo i'll try <3

ShadowPikaboo

16 Oct, 2017, 5:05 pm

Re: your welcome! I'm glad you like it! X3

She a really fun character

LadyWinter

16 Oct, 2017, 5:12 pm

i love this pic

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