Crying by Pink-Espeon

It really hurts keeping everything bottled up.
I finally have time alone and i am spending it sobbing.

Im so stressed out every day and i dont know what to do.

I cant be selfish, if i am i am making myself a liability to others.
all i ever do is work, school, and sleep

i always feel inadequate because im not good at certain things, and it shows in my grades.

Im failing a class because i cant write rhetoric work well and im just given zeros constantly.

i just need this time to cry.

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06 Oct, 2017, 1:14 am
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Soul7Chaos

06 Oct, 2017, 9:14 am

When you have so much pain and pressure built inside of you and never release it. It's only natural that it'll find it's own way out of your body. This one find a way out through your lovely eyes.

Let those tears run down your body and allow them to wash away all the pain and suffering you experince over time.

Speaking of natural habits, you should know everyone has flaws in this world.

Does that make you any different, should you feel bad for having such flaws and mistakes?

No, I believe you shouldn't think negatively about yourself in anyway shape or form.

Mostly because I know you're a great person in life and mean well, especially at working and trying harder than others.

I really hope things get better for you as time moves on, if anyone deserves a good time in life, it's definitely you.

Also I wish you the best in learning and passing your classes. Until next time, take care and stay safe.

pillowblanket

11 Oct, 2017, 3:59 pm

Hey! We haven't talked in more than a year I think... but I'm rooting for you in the bg!!

For writing rhetoric it would be better to get a grasp at Eros, Pathos, then Logos. Then tone and diction (syntax [sentence structure]). When you understand those you can better see rhetoric in non-fiction works and use it in your own! If you need more help, send a mssg to me on tumblr (lucharan) or note me on dA (pillowbianket)

Wish you well,
Toy

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