WiP: Welcome to the Pumpkin Patch! by Apikah

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Finished piece is uploaded to @Pocket-Sand. He helped me with a background and we ended up breaking the playback, so I cannot post it here... Will be posting an edited version to other places such as DA and Amino under the name Batpikah.

My attempt at some "creepy" artwork...
#aocSlash with muh bros @Spritdeer, @Pocket-Sand, and #GrumpYeen. (Go follow them~ They arts real goods~ Make me jelly~)

Also wanna thank everyone for the many likes on my artwork recently! It is greatly appreciated! TTwTT

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
02 Oct, 2017, 9:27 pm
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NoneOfIt

03 Oct, 2017, 2:09 am

I think it will turn out splendid! The line work is extremely clean, the poses are natural and show case the different personalities of the characters. The foreshortening is looking, too! The only two descrepencies, in my opinion, are that the front-most character's nose line doesn't match up in terms of placement with his snout and head. Its too crooked, in my opinion. Lastly, and this might be me, the character in the furthest back area seems a little hidden. So far, so good! ^^

NoneOfIt

03 Oct, 2017, 2:47 am

Re: Your welcome! Truth be told, I don't see how you could give him more space without making everyone smaller or changing the poses entirely, or both!

NoneOfIt

03 Oct, 2017, 3:24 am

Re: I wish!!! By the way, thank you for the like, and I'd welcome any critiques you might have for me! I'm interested to hear other peoples opinions and constructive criticisms!

Jo-Kai Gon-Zo

07 Oct, 2017, 10:07 pm

Woah, this legit looks reallt cool, I wish I can draw that many characters while the picture still looks nice like yours.

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