Try try and try again by Yachett

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#YACHRP

I'll start the rp btw

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
24 Sep, 2017, 5:06 am
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Yachett

24 Sep, 2017, 5:11 am

*It is raining in a forest not too far from the metropolis*
Yavata:*is horribly damaged, with her right arm and eye gone and her chest with a large cut through it, leaving a blood trail behind her* *running* *holding her arm close to her chest and soiled clothing* G-god damn it...that maniac...I knew he was dangerous...but just...gah! *trips over a tree root and gets her leg stuck in it* *growls* *gets out her hunting dagger and starts cutting at the brittle root*

JustAlph

24 Sep, 2017, 12:13 pm

Alpha:(playing a game of chess with Hiro)Having a good day brother?
Hiro:(nods)I sure did!How about you?(moves a rook)
Alpha:Exhausting.We were trying to retrieve some of our rescue units.(as she moves her knight,she hears Yavata yelling in pain)Excuse me for a moment.(gets up,dashes into the forest,looking for the source of sound)

Yachett

24 Sep, 2017, 2:18 pm

Yavata:*continuing to slice at the root* What the hell is with this root?! *hears footsteps* *looks around* G-god damn it! ...Just kill me already and get it over with! You already killed my "friends" anyway!

JustAlph

25 Sep, 2017, 1:10 am

(Sorry I was late!^^'I've been playing Miitopia for most of the day today...)

Alpha:(sees Yavata,dashes to her,looks at all the wounds)Hold on!I'll get you medical help!Just let me patch you up first!

Yachett

25 Sep, 2017, 10:45 pm

Yavata:*tries to back away from Alpha* Can you not get in my way right now?! I'm in a bit of a situation here and I cannot have someone pop out of no where!

JustAlph

26 Sep, 2017, 4:40 am

Alpha:0-0(backs away)(thinking:Only wanted to help...perhaps this would be the best way to do so?)

Yachett

29 Sep, 2017, 9:51 pm

Yavata:I don't need help. *slices harder at the root*

JustAlph

30 Sep, 2017, 5:40 pm

Alpha:(backs away again)

Hiro:(waiting)Huh...Alph's been gone for a while and hasn't returned....(starts levitating)

Yachett

01 Oct, 2017, 5:42 am

Yavata:*eventually slices off the root, stands up and looks around* Looks like he stopped for now.

JustAlph

01 Oct, 2017, 6:05 pm

Alpha:Who?

Hiro:(flies into the scene)Alph!You're alright!What happened?

Yachett

01 Oct, 2017, 7:32 pm

Yavata:*looks at Hiro* ...

JustAlph

03 Oct, 2017, 11:40 am

Hiro:Let me help you!I'll get you out!(summons a light shuriken)

Yachett

06 Oct, 2017, 9:56 pm

Yavata:I don't need any help.

JustAlph

07 Oct, 2017, 4:08 am

Hiro:Are you sure about that?It's never considered weakness to ask for help.

Yachett

07 Oct, 2017, 5:29 pm

Yavata:That's what they all say. *slices the root in half and struggles to get up due to her missing arm*

Yachett

07 Oct, 2017, 11:31 pm

(Hey Alpha. I came up w/ a good plot for a Megaman[classic] and the person who I wanted to originally rp w/ didn't want to rp before I could even tell her my idea, so I was wondering if you wanted to rp w/ this plot? The plot is that the robot masters have been mysteriously disappearing and everyone believes that there is a killer among them so they investigate.)

JustAlph

09 Oct, 2017, 1:07 am

[Hell yeah!!^0^!Sounds awesome!Oh BTW,someone you may know from one of Dr.Anton's RPs came here!]

Hiro:No,I'm dead serious!The smartest ones have always asked for help![hint:Hiro's very philisophical,just like Alpha]Can we at least lead you to safety?

Yachett

13 Oct, 2017, 9:42 pm

(That's good to hear <:))
Yavata:...Brawn over brain. That's how I survive.

Yachett

13 Oct, 2017, 9:43 pm

(Who came to colors?)

JustAlph

14 Oct, 2017, 9:50 pm

I lied.Two people came!Two of my Miiverse buddies came here.They are @UltimateMavXav[you might remember him from "The Misfits" RP on Miiverse]and @ZiraAnthem.They both do a lot of MegaMan content.I recomend following them!

Alpha:...(thinking:She must be daring enough to think that way...)
Hiro:0-0 *quietly*Remind me not to get on your bad side...

Yachett

14 Oct, 2017, 9:59 pm

Yavata:*gets up and sighs* Appreciate your help, but I have no idea who you two are.

JustAlph

14 Oct, 2017, 11:18 pm

Alpha:Right...We never did introduce ourselves....I'm StormheartAlpha,commander of the rescue corps.Also a Class S Hunter.
Hiro:My name is Hiro.I'm a member of the Elites for the Maverick Hunters

Yachett

14 Oct, 2017, 11:45 pm

Yavata:Ugh...The reason why I'm in this condition was because of one of your damn units.

JustAlph

15 Oct, 2017, 2:30 am

Alpha:What?(an expression of surprise is seen on her face)
Hiro:*curious yet slightly angry*Who did this to you?

Yachett

29 Oct, 2017, 7:41 pm

Yavata:I dunno! All I know was that he was wearin' red!

(Hey Alpha, I'm gonna be honest right now. I'm not attacking you or anything. Take this as critism ok? I... I'm not a big fan of your character. There are several loop holes to her. How did she get to S rank when she's younger than her brother? Also, Zero was made by Wily, so how was Alpha human/reploid if her bro was made by Wily? Was she a child vounteering to become a robot master like Yavata did? I'm just givin' ya some tips to make your character better. After all, characters developed over time are better than characters made from the spot. I'm not telling you to get rid of your character. I like how she looks. It's ok tho, I understand that the best bio takes a long time to create. It took me 5 months to make Lydia's ( #YACHLydia) backstory.)

JustAlph

29 Oct, 2017, 10:43 pm

Oh!Well,her birth story is kindof an AU I'm sharing with @ZiraAnthem,but if we want to stick with the original timeline,Wily could have built Alpha to accompany Zero or keep him in check,but wakes up later than Zero and ends up being mentored by the SunriseWarriors,which are killed off by the Mavericks.As for Hiro,he's killed by Xavian Lee and remained dead until he had permission by the GreatSpirit to serve the physical world again.To find out more,I'm hoping to get the rest of her story here once Miiverse[currently posting to]shuts down].I'm sort of trying to blend the original with AUs,but I'm not quite sure if I was doing a good job at it tbh.Thanks for the tips anyways!^^'

JustAlph

29 Oct, 2017, 10:44 pm

Hiro:*astonished*Zero?!
Alpha:!!(thinking:My blood brother would never do that!)

JustAlph

29 Oct, 2017, 11:44 pm

I might explain a little bit more about Alpha throughout this rp.[Fun Fact,I had her since 2015,but I ditched her first story pitch and developed her character through Rping.]

Yachett

30 Oct, 2017, 12:09 am

Yavata:He said that we were just practice and that he was tired of all of us wreaking havoc on the town all the time. I was just elected chief of the tribe 2 days earlier and had no idea about the attack.
(Well, Yavata volunteered to become the world's first human who turned into a robot. The scientist(Dr. Dayrun[another oc of mine]) she volunteered herself to was murdered 2 months later and she was never reactivated until 100 yrs later by Vile.)

JustAlph

30 Oct, 2017, 12:31 am

(Alph started out as a fighter unit as a class B like X,but she didn't quite click with her job because she wasn't quite getting along with Alia,one of the navigators.It got so bad,Alpha almost died on a mission because of an'miscalculation'caused by Alia.She was then transferred to the RescueCorps and securred a higher rank.She became a class S hunter after she became the Rescue Corps Commander,two years after Zero became a class S]

Alpha:Well,looks like I'll have to have a word with him.I never thought he'd get this arrogant to think this way...
Hiro:I hope we can still be friends with you,despite us being Hunters and all!

Yachett

30 Oct, 2017, 1:14 am

Yavata:*trying to keep her muddied chest bandages on*

JustAlph

30 Oct, 2017, 2:11 am

Hiro:(thinking:Luckily I bring a first aid kit...)Do you need any new bandages?I have some spare.(pulls out a large roll of gauze)

Yachett

03 Nov, 2017, 9:25 pm

Yavata:GIMME

JustAlph

05 Nov, 2017, 11:54 am

Hiro:(an earnest look is seen on his face)Would you like a hand applying them?(hands Yavata the gauze)

Yachett

05 Nov, 2017, 5:46 pm

Yavata:*shakes her head no*

JustAlph

07 Nov, 2017, 4:02 am

Hiro:Understood.(puts a fan in front of his face,as if to avert his eyes)
Alpha:I think we'll give you a bit of privacy while you replace and adjust your bandages.If you need anything else,don't be afraid to ask.(turns away)
Hiro:(follows suit)

Yachett

18 Nov, 2017, 12:58 am

Yavata:Thanks...I guess. *turns around and starts wrapping the fresh bandages around her huge breasts*

JustAlph

21 Nov, 2017, 5:35 pm

Alpha:(behind a tree)
Hiro:Why the heck would Zero attack another without orders?
Alpha:I dunno Hiro...He is a bit of a rebel sometimes...

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