Trident summoned his trident of power and waved it over his head and formed a funnal of water the pillered into the sky. Rath lunged with a lightning bolt at hand and crushed Trident's funnal nd split it in half. Trident then flew and slamed into Rath as both of them fell in to the ocean.
Tein and Silver watched helplessly as they saw lightning blast's in the water. Trident shot out of the water being striked by a bolt. Rath followed with his wicked smile. Trident formed chains of water and wraped them around Rath and submerged him into the water.

Trident flew right in where Rath was being held and said "stop this insainity Rath." Rath roared so loud that his lightning purged the chains. Rath held out his hands and said "forgive me brother."
Tein watched the sky erupt so many lightning bolts that it almost appared to be day time. The lightning strikes started to form around Rath and then form a ball of lightning. Trident summoned a tsunami.
Rath roared as he fired a bolt of lightning that split the very ocean and cut right threw Tridents tsunami and turned him to ash. The only thing left of him was his chest crystal. His trident flew and landed in front of Tein and Silver. Rath graved his crystal and ate it. Rath roared into the sky and yelled,"yes i can now feel the ocean. Who is next the god of the sea's power is now mine!"
Tein fell to his knees and as he watched Rath bolt into the sky. Tein stared into his hands and shut his eye and yelled "Why, why must this happen!" A voice came from the trident whitch towerd over him.

Tein yelled" Who said that?! That voice Trident!" The trident of power shrunk to Tein's size and said "Weld my power young one and stop Rath please he want's to summon Armageddon and distroy him we must not let that happen. even if he gets all our powers he wont be able to beat him!" Tein stood up and picked up Trident and held him. Tein felt the ocean's power Tein then said "How can i feel your power Rath took it from you?" Trident said "No I cut my power in half so i can weld it more easly in battle." Silver said "Is it possable my lord to talk Rath out of it?" Trident said "No it is not when he has his mind set to something he follows threw. Tein save our youngest brother Rage he is sure to go after him next." Tein stood there and said "i well lord of the sea."
End of chapter 1

Am so mad right now that colors pulled this again it fused layer 2 and 3 on me. Trust me i am realy mad right now i could have reposted it untell it fixed it but no i had to notice it right now after i wrote down all that just now wonderful.-_-'

Nooooo split not spilt i should have spell checked this s#$# before i posted it i feel dumb.T-T

I tried to repost it but no luck the layers keep fusing and am realy feeling like i f# #ed up here hopefuly the next time i post it wont be like this.T-T
I also realy need to spell check my sh## before i post story's or my painting titles why me.T-T

am a little happy that the start of the story came out ok i did miss up on well nd is "and" and before pillered is "That" in stead of "the" its read able.-_-'

it makes me mad that i spent weeks on this only for the colors app to butcher it am in a loss for words right now.T-T

wow this is epic !

Still as talented :) keep it up (So layers fused you said ?)

Wow!! This is incredibly epic and intense, I love it!! The painting is awesome, as well as the story writing! I don't see why you should be so upset over a few mistakes, when there are enough good parts to blow us all back! :)

Epic!
I love Trident's nose!

Reply: Thank you! Thick lines are kinda my thing

Hey, don't be too hard on yourself! The painting is still awesome, and the story was epic! I enjoyed reading it, and I'm excited for the next one! :3

I'm sorry Colors messed up and this is just so Awesome! :) God Bless!

Awesone linework and I love the lightning. The designs are also epic :D