I haven't finished it yet, please comment and rate :)

Its Good but i think u need to give your stars and flashes a bit of dazzle, up your brush size to a little bigger than the star turn your opacity down to zero and colour to white or what ever colour you want the dazzle to look then dab the stylus over the stars a couple of times gives it that glowing effect apart from that well done great work :o)*

Thanks for the feedback :) Your work is awesome! :)

Yep!
You got to focus more on lettering mainly! But what you do is a good start!

Thanks man. I'm much better at tagging with paint or pens and ink, just starting to use DS for it recently so that's why it's not up to my usual lettering standards and it's a bit rough lol haha :) I'll get better at using the DS for art soon, just gotta keep going with it lol