Pumpkin berry for cream by Milk-and-cookies

#Parfaeby #ParfaePattisier #MCOD #CreamyPashy Sorry i didn't reply to you earlier, figured it be better to just rush & finish your bab today, this bab's the same type as that other dark phaeby i made some time ago. (Sub species still doesn't have a name tho)
Meaning he's got little wings on his lower back/right around his tail. (Something like that) i also made an outfit for him just because.

Feel free to make changes, & use #Parfaeby whenever you draw him.

Rare traits in comments.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
05 Sep, 2017, 6:47 am
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Milk-and-cookies

05 Sep, 2017, 6:53 am

Like all phaeby's he has a diamond thingy on his head. (Hard as one to) this thing works like a third eye.

His ears are rabbity, and neck floof is super soft.

Rare traits are:
2 fruits. (Berries (Any kind) & pumpkin... no idea if pumpkin is even a fruit or not.)

Claws on feet.
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To anyone else still waiting for a design, be patient please, i'm only one person, i can only do so much.

EclipseOcelote

05 Sep, 2017, 7:05 am

YOURE DESIGNS AR SO CUTE!!!!!!

Lumatra

05 Sep, 2017, 7:36 am

dunno exacly but i mean Pumpkin
is not a fruit
but wuw Cookie theyre awesome, one of your best species X3

Hollow_Souls

05 Sep, 2017, 9:39 am

They are adorable

CreamyPashy

05 Sep, 2017, 10:51 am

ABDAFDfaaff I love himmm but Shira I told you not to rush yourself nooo x'D
and right when you said you needed that rest for your hands x'>

and..I am also confused about the pumpkin thing :u I remember being part of this huge heated debate wether things like tomatoes, pumpkins, and other vegetables were actually fruit because they had seeds

NicoAkira

05 Sep, 2017, 3:13 pm

Yay, let's do this!
I guess I'll start :)

Proportions look great--her waist is small, but that's pretty well endemic to the style
The detail in the eyes is nice, it draws the attention naturally to the face
The tail could use some work--maybe not so rigid an edge, so it feels more like fur, and add a little more detail to the stripes--again, less of an "edge"
Excellent job on the feet (I always have trouble with those)
Hair looks great on the right, but seems a little flat on the chibi

That's all I can think of for now, hope it helps!

NicoAkira

05 Sep, 2017, 3:29 pm

WOW just realized it's a dude... whoops '>>
Well, in that case, the curves around his waist are more feminine in nature. Guys tend to have straighter lines (if that makes sense)
umm, let's see if I can do this... heck, no backslash
okay, well, a woman's waist is more like this: ) (
a man's is more like this: [insert backslash here] /
This is because women need wider hips to allow for childbirth, so men's waists don't widen as soon/as high
Hopefully that makes sense...
(All I can think is that you totally did it on purpose and I just spent 10 minutes trying to explain something you already knew XD )

CreamyPashy

05 Sep, 2017, 4:33 pm

re// ahh but you know I would still wait x'D
Me too, and that's my most biggest problem too, that's why I recently deleted a few refs and dropped characters (the refs because the characters were a part of story I'm making and the adopted characters I have I can't talk to designers as they left and are mostly on da to return them) and I left myself to a small number of characters that I can draw and love. I love designing things but I only keep the design if I'm really positive about x'D
But when you open customs/design trades and people ask for a design don't think about, it's /very/ stressful for you, another thing you can do is when you're designing something for someone give a estimate time on how long it takes for you to complete (but do mention that you might take breaks/work on something else for a while) and you'll be fine everyone understands you can't be overloaded and being rushed is awful if someone does that (in a mean way) punish them by taking 2x as long (x'D)
theres more

CreamyPashy

05 Sep, 2017, 4:43 pm

- If you're confused or have no inspiration to finish something browse or look around outside (or at least I do that the sky keeps me going :v)
woah really? I understand this now, the pressure's bad and it's kinda suffocating, of course it's right that he needs to wait he needs to be patient if you want to finish the design smoothly
but when you do things for others don't have that mindset, it's toxic and might even bring you down on your work, take your time, take brakes
I don't understand/ or haven't seen what max said to you but if you're feeling stressed relax and enjoy yourself
are there other things that are bothering you? :o
//ehhhheehh sorry if this doesn't makes sense or I repeated something I'm up but dang I need to wake up

XNei_YuiX

05 Sep, 2017, 9:30 pm

//Aaaah, welcome to the club then x''D I also saw your comment on my vent post :'o I'm glad I'm not the only one

CreamyPashy

05 Sep, 2017, 9:45 pm

re// ahh but if you have any problem please feel free to tell me! I hate seeing my friends burdened
It's the same for me too there's barely any nature in my city (but thank god I live near a park) the sky (especially when sky is blue) and trees basically if I stare at anything that's not a person :v

NicoAkira

05 Sep, 2017, 10:16 pm

re: I knew it!
Also, he's adorable, I have to say
Yeah, anything non-human I tend to kinda gloss over... In fact, I'm working on redrawing the wings on one of my characters, since the first time 'round I just pretended I knew what I was doing (and surprise, surprise, I didn't). Luckily, now that they're more realistic, they look way better even though they're less detailed--which legitimately surprised me, in a good way XD

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