Here's Chapter 3!!! Wow i'm proud of dis x'D Now it gets real hehehe ewe ENJOY! (I'll put it in comments dont comment until I finish it will barely take a minute :3) #TheFrozenWarrior #IceWolfSF #TundrilSF #BlackStoneSF #Wolf #Pack #Rock #Mountain #WolvianSF
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02 Sep, 2017, 8:04 pm
The Alpha looked over at Tundril and then scowled at the pup. He hated her because if she learned how to be a true wolf, she could overthrow him from his 'thrown'. He turned his head away and looked at the other side of the cliff. Tundril led the pup to the small cave and let her rest, she came out and walked up to her Alpha. "Sir... Why don't you like her... She could largely benefit us and she is just a helpless pup..." He scowled and looked towards her, "A helpless pup? Ha! She is a devil, demon, monster! She doesn't deserve our sympathy what so ever!" He said in anger. Tundril lowered her head a bit. "She doesn't know any better... I taught her how to hunt, we don't need to share food with her because she eats... Snow..." She trailed off in thought, //What in the world could she be?!?!?!// "So what, she can cause us nothing but trouble once she grows. She would kill us all, I can see it in her eyes." BlackStone was relentless, it wasn't easy for anyone to convince him.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:05 pm
Tundril sighed heavily and walked back into the cave. "He still doesn't like you..." She said to the young Wolvian. The large timberwolf layed down and curled her tails round the pup, just as her mother use to do... IceWolf cuddled up against her and fell asleep. After a long rest it was finally morning, the light shone into then the den, waking both of them up.
BlackStone and the rest of the pack were secretly discussing how to kill the puppy.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:05 pm
She loves the cold, let's give her some heat." One suggested, "Yeah we can use the rocks that bake in the sun every day, those have to be pipin' hot!" Another said. The Alpha nodded. "Perfect, we'll cook her like an egg. Gather the rocks once I give the Omega howl." He grinned menacingly, ready to slaughter the young princess like she had slaughtered the rabbit but far more painful. Heat itself can kill her very easily. "I'll wake her up." He padded over to the rocky tunnel and made a low howl to wake her up. The others pretended to just be waking up. Tundril walked out of her hole further and stretched, she had a feeling they wanted IceWolf dead so she didn't wake the pup fully up yet.
"Morning Tundril, where is the pup?" One said, acting casually. She scowled and didn't respond. She walked up to the Alpha angrily.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:06 pm
"I heard your stupid plans and they won't work. She is not leaving the den unti-" she turned around seeing the beta grab the pup by her scruff, the others approaching the hot rocks in snowy mounds to prevent from burning themselves. "No..." She said in worry. The pup whimpered, seeing the hot rocks made her extremely fearful. Her claws erupted from her sockets, they were glowing a royal purple and were almost blinding. The wolves winced a little, one put a rock up against her for only a split second before she swiped her claw and the rock was cleanly cut into two halves. They backed up and dropped the pup, lowering their heads in fear. "Or she could do that..." Tundril said, looking at the pup in awe. IceWolf growled at the Alpha, her claws out, ready to tear him to shreds. The Alpha stood in shock, not knowing what exactly he should do.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:07 pm
IceWolf slowly walked up to him, a murderous savage look in her eyes. She got really close to him and held up her claws, prepared to swipe.
She pulled them back in and fell over laughing. Even Tundril was thinking //What the heck?!?!?!// The Alpha tilted his head, still having fear in his eyes. "Ummm...." She looked up to him, "Haha you all fell for it! Hahaha!" She got up, "Ahhhh... You guys thought I was gonna kill one of you haha I wouldn't do that to save my own life." She joked. "Ha ha ha... Not funny pup, you really made me think I was going to die! Proof you are just a disaster waiting to happen." He walked off growling. IceWolf shrugged, "At least I don't judge a book by its cover!" She called out before walking up to Tundril. "You know I wouldn't do that." The Timberwolf shrugged, half smiling. "Well... You made it seem so haha. But seriously, how come you never talked before..." IceWolf looked down, she was frowning.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:08 pm
"My mom died... She's the only one I ever talked to and she died... I never talked again till now..." Tundril looked in sympathy and put her paw on the princess's back gently. "I'm sort yo hear that... What is your name anyways?..."
IceWolf wagged her tail a bit. "IceWolf!" she said happily. "Haha what a pretty name. Let's go get this confused pack some grub shall we?" She suggested, standing up, already trotting towards the path that led off the mountain and into the deep snowy wilderness. "Ya!" She said excitingly.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:08 pm
Her and IceWolf had treked far through the thick cold brush, gathering as many hares as possibly nearly enough to feed them for a whole 5 months at this point.
MeanWhile on planet Magnius: The home of the LavaDragons, the one who had killed her mother was reporting back to their leader. "She and her pup are dead sir. The father was killed by humans too. The rein of then royal Wolvian is no more." She assured him. The king scowled, orange energy swirling around his scales. "You are certain, then where is the pup's body?" The female LavaDragon bowed her head, "completely starved and demolished in the lava." He nodded, "Good. Let's start planning our little... Visit."
They returned from the thick brush and dropped all the food they gathered in the food pile. "There we go, plenty of rabbits and one bear we caught on the way ." IceWolf wagged her tail, "Yup! Breakfast's on us!" She said happily.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:09 pm
The pack looked in confusion, still a little fearful of the Wolvian but couldn't turn down so much food after barely being able to eat ever since this blizzard-like weather. They dug in and ate what they needed, the Alpha, not eating one bite. He ate what was left of his kill, a large hare he spotted on his own. He devoured it in anger, ripping the fresh meat from the bone while the others continued munching down on the plentiful amount of food brought by IceWolf.
"That little wretch!... She needs to go... A mutant so powerful would not be fit for this wolf pack. She is no wolf... Just a monster..." BlackStone said quietly to himself. //The trials to determine ranks... That could be the key to her failure...// he trailed off in his thoughts.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:10 pm
After a long eating session the had pack finally settled down, they hadn't eaten like that for months. IceWolf munched on some ice, wagging her tail as she was cuddled up against Tundril. The Timberwolf was resting her head on her paws, smiling as she watched IceWolf eat all the ice that was around her. The sun started to disappear behind large storm clouds, a snow storm was coming.
Soon after, the wind picked up and it became dangerously cold. The pack went into the caves and hid from the Storm. IceWolf ran back out and played in the snow like it was nothing. She pawed at the flakes and barked at the pack, "What are you guys waiting for? haha!" She was unaware that normal wolves can die in such conditions. Tundril watched in worry. "IceWolf don't you think you should stay inside?... Blizzards can... Kill..." IceWolf tilted her head in shock, "W-what?..." She lowered her ears and walked back into the shelter. "Sorry..."
02 Sep, 2017, 8:10 pm
Tundril sighed, "It's alright IceWolf..." Tundril paused, "You're different and that's okay. Just please stay in, at least for today. Once the blizzard is clear we can play." She assured the pup. IceWolf lowered her head and walked in, the word 'Blizzard' only reminded her of her dad. She whimpered and curled up far from the others. For some time she nearly forgot about them. "IceWolf?... You okay?" Tundril had approached her, standing with a worried look on her face. "I'm fine..." Is all the Wolvian pup muttered. The Timberwolf sighed. "It's clear you aren't... Do you wish to talk about it? I'm here if you need comfort." IceWolf shook her head. "It's just... Family problems... I'll get over it..." //I will find you lava dragon... One day you'll pay... You are the reason my family is on this planet and not home...// she thought in slight anger.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:11 pm
In the Galaxy of War, right in between the planet Sylyoris, planet of many creatures and Marrowbelle, the Tigon homeworld, was the molten wasteland, Magnius. The leader of the LavaDragons was preparing his army for the attack and going over the plan with his coordinators, the killer of IceWolf's mother was planning her own attack. Her plans were not meant to benefit her species but to help IceWolf and overthrow her leader...
IceWolf woke up to the fresh layed powder and no more blizzard. Without thought she ran past Tundril and dove into the white sea of frozen crystals. The power flew up as she crashed down. Giggling she rolled around and pawed at the glistening snow. The female Timberwolf twitched awake and peeked outside only to see her adoptive daughter prancing and playing in the sheet of snow left from the blizzard. She sat and watched too tired to join but happy to see her as herself again.
The rest of the pack walked out and started pushing the snow off the best they could.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:12 pm
IceWolf stopped and sat watching in disappointment, she still wagged her tail because she had fun while it lasted. The Alpha stepped up on a the tallest rock of the flat mountainside and howled to get their attention. The pack gathered in an orderly fashion by rank and age and IceWolf stuck by Tundril's side. "What is-.... going on?..." The pup questioned. From the Timberwolf there was no answer. Just silence as the pack gathered together. Finally the Alpha's voice broke the silence, "My fellow pack members, thanks up for gathering. Today is not an ordinary day, today we welcome a new member with a new rank into our family." He looked down to IceWolf. He stepped down and walked pass her with a grin. "The pup that has defied all physics we knew so well in our kind, IceWolf, it's time for you to become part of our family." He said directly to her.
02 Sep, 2017, 8:13 pm
Her eyes widened and she tensed up, //Is he?... Am I...?- He's got a look in his eye this can't be true...// she thought in confusion and suspicion.
(That's it for now! On to the next chapter! Hope you all enjoyed ^-^)
02 Sep, 2017, 8:13 pm
Thank you*
02 Sep, 2017, 8:41 pm
Awesome job! The cover for this looks great also. I really like the way you've drawn those wolves. :D
02 Sep, 2017, 8:59 pm
Woah, awesome story!
02 Sep, 2017, 11:35 pm
Re: the first painting on the tag i guess?
03 Sep, 2017, 5:40 am
Re: Thank you! <3 What a story, nicely done, the art is so good too! ;W;
03 Sep, 2017, 5:59 am
The Story is amazing!!!
03 Sep, 2017, 7:00 am
HOLY **** its a lot to get through XD really good though!!
03 Sep, 2017, 2:02 pm
Your story's are amazing! :)
03 Sep, 2017, 5:44 pm
Re: Hahahhaha the **** are some really bad words that a Christina doesnt want to hear XD I respect what you believe so I didn't want to offend you :3
03 Sep, 2017, 6:08 pm
Re: sQee thank you! I just needed to enter xp
And I'll be looking foward to the space goat and his clones! :3
03 Sep, 2017, 6:52 pm
Re: yah!
03 Sep, 2017, 7:39 pm
Re: Nice, that's super cool! But if I remember correctly, I thought we were doing a dt for him?
03 Sep, 2017, 9:20 pm
Re: Oh, that sucks that you had to do that o": I cry for you. I think I wanted like rose quartz colored pinks and blacks
03 Sep, 2017, 9:32 pm
I'm sure I could, but because I already did a request of yours and I still have a few other people left to do, it will be a while. I'm also kind of obsessed with my guys right now so when I start to calm down I'll see what I can do :'')
thank you!
04 Sep, 2017, 3:43 am
Re// CHEESE!
04 Sep, 2017, 6:23 pm
Re: thank you ^-^
05 Sep, 2017, 6:07 am
Thanks Day that means a lot :'''D
I don't usually get comments telling me they like my character
05 Sep, 2017, 12:54 pm
Re: I'm glad you liked it!
05 Sep, 2017, 1:29 pm
Re: yeah, lifeless is really hard XD but I gotta admit, your art looks far better then what I can draw, let me tell ya that XD seriously though, thanks a lot for the kind words, and I'm really glad to hear that you might be entering in the dta can't wait to see if you do or not!
05 Sep, 2017, 1:29 pm
Lineless*
05 Sep, 2017, 4:27 pm
Hey there, Day. I kinda don't want to bring this up because it actually makes me a little sad to think about, but I'm just wondering if you saw my comment to you regarding me and Faf? I guess it's a little obvious as to what it's about but I'm just curious to know weather or not you saw it..
05 Sep, 2017, 6:37 pm
Re: Okay, and yeah, that's basically it..
If you want to read it I can tell you what pic it's on, but you don't have to.
05 Sep, 2017, 8:02 pm
Re, The comment is on the picture that says "it helped a lot". It's long, and thinking about it now, it doesn't explain my reason for leaving all that well, sorry. And thanks for your understanding, I was kinda nervous to bring this up.
05 Sep, 2017, 8:50 pm
Re: lol I didn't realize it took that long XD and thanks ^-^
06 Sep, 2017, 1:10 pm
Re: Phew, okay, again, thanks for understanding! If you could let the others know I'd appreciate it. Oh and yeah, we can continue our rp at anytime really. I know you go to school, but I'm (as I've mentioned tons of times xD) homeschooled and don't do much around here, so literally anytime you wanna continue, let me know and I'll make a room for it. And yeah, that's not a bad idea. We could start something like that. Lol that would be the third rp Crystal is in. XD And yeah, so there's no confusion, I could also basically start Crystal from the beginning and have her get sent to whatever world Whisper is in instead of being the the Skey world. <-- I like that part. I can make her a blubbering mess again XD no jk, well.. not completely.
Okay, I hope you have a good day, thanks and talk to ya soon!