Hello, I know I don't comment on your paintings and sorry for that. I have read your previous post and I know why you are posting this, I could tell you what things do I like and what I don't like about your art, but it's your artstyle and it's unique. I don't know if you understand me lol, for example my friends tell me that my characters eyes' looks like they are in drugs but what can I do if that is how I draw?
A thing I can tell you to work on is anatomy, but it's the same with me xD Your shading is absolutly amazing. You are always improving and if you don't believe me I suggest you looking at your older pictures :)
Also, don't let comments hurt you. Some people no have idea of how difficult is being a decent artist :'v Keep up the great work.

Ok here goes.

As i said in the previous post every artist has their strength's & weaknesses.

Lets start at what your bad at, then what your good at, then where to improve first.

Weak points: Facial structure, body anatomy, and facial features. While unlike other artist you have inproved greatly at lighting & effects, your lineart needs some work.
Starting with the head. The cheekbones are to pronounced & portrude to much, while it's true cheekbones stick out, their not really noticable except from a sideway's-ish view. the face should be smoother, less angular.
The jaw is to angular? or V shaped. (not sure if right word) And the eye's are to close together.

Good: You excell at things that others aren't even close to learning, have great forshortening skills, lighting shading & effects are all great, you have a good understanding of colors and drawing from various points of views.

Your drawing are positively gorgeous, but the only thing holding you back is your anatomy.

What you should work on: For now other things below the neck can wait, work on making the face more natural. once you get a more natural shape down everything on the face should line up fine on it's on.

As of now your artstyle looks somewhere between being chibi-ish and not. It's to angular to be chibi, but to ?small? to not be.

:'u i REALLY hope i didn't sound to harsh & am extremely sorry if i did, i feel more comfortable being honest with ppl i know so i didn't hold back. ;-; i'll really do wanna help. i'm nowhere near being a amazing artist but i can post some examples if you want. ;-;