break or be broken... by EclipseOcelote
Once a long time ago, that we have heard before but it doesn't happen often that a story a legacy starts with:” As the first touch of sunlight raised on the peaks of the castle” but this time it sure starts there. As a lonely wanderer you would see a castle bathing in sunlight, you would wonder what happens within the walls. Knowing that you’ll never get the anwser you continue your journey. But little did you know that within those walls a bright young girl was raised with love and peace. Evelyn the princess of house keenon had a promising future. But as she got older the trials of her life began to unfold. She fell in love with a boy from a town near by, she loved him with all her heart and soul. Nothing could ever break that the folks told rumours about these two that one day this boy would marry the princess. But plans don't always go as planned because that boy noticed how dysfunctional the house was. So he picked another female and married her instead. Mercyless he left Evelyn broken and with the rage and anger in her blood and veins she went to the evil Elanceria for revenge. But instead of revenge she got a curse, this curse forced her into isolation and lonelyness. The only thing she could keep where her two horses Eliza and Angelica. Togheter they would dance at midnight when the moon was full. They danced on a sandbank in a lake not to far from the castle that once was her home. The curse can only be broken if someone with a heart of gold came by and would treuly love her. Or if it is her time to take her place on the trone. Everybody without a heart of gold that sees them dance will forget what they saw when there more then 4 miles away from the lake. This isolation made Evelyn shy and closed she would have a hard time ever trusting humans again…… (moving on we got the dapple sisters aka Evelyn’s horses. They have backstory to >:) Eliza and Angelica are twins but there birth was unlawfull. The are half-bloods. There mother comes from a circes and (cont)
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30 Jul, 2017, 10:01 pm
Her story is so awesome, you did an amazing job here!
Re: You're welcome! ^^
31 Jul, 2017, 5:24 am
(Cont)from a circes and is a full-blood friesian. There father comes from a wild herd and is a full-blood Gypsy Vanner. After there birth the mother named Jessi took Eliza and the father named Spotted Obsidian took Angelica.Eliza was raised as show horse her peronality had become shy and easely scared. Being a show horse she did learn to dance very well. But she felt like there was more, more potential for her life. Her mother never told her anything about her twin sister nor her father. But everyday the moving sun passed her curiousity got bigger and bigger. Untill one day she gather all her courage and ran. She walked away from home and ran and kept on running for days and she found a forest. She walked into it and there she bumper into herself……… Angelica was raised as a warrior earning her stripes and codes as the days past. She did not feel the need to leave eventhought the herd would never fully accept her. She lived up to the codes and religin that was tought her and did everything to prove her worth. In her spare time she walk beside streams and lakes. Slowly she began to make elegant moved a long the way that finaly resulted in dancing really good dancing even. One day when the sun had raisen blood red one of the patrols saw her dance. She was kicked out of the herd that same moment and she was chaised of into the forest. In that forest she bumper into herself….. the two sisters stared at each other not understanding what just happend. They sticked togheter and learned each others story's a long the way. They danced togheter and the just knew they were twins they could feel it with all there heart and soul!! And the rest as they say is history….. they some how ended up at the horse marked where princess Evelyn bought them. The sisters swore to stay with her till the last drop of life would drip out of them. They kept there word and now carry a bit of the curse that was layed upon the beloved princess. So it will be forever more if now one changes it…….. you look up at the story teller and he smiles. Then he softly wishpers in your ears maybe that one is you…….. the sun sinks behind the hills and pulls its light with it leaving only drakness to show that another chapter has ended. That's it everybody!!! I hope you enjoyed this special backstory for my zilariun i’m getting from @Spectral-Ashwood. I hope i can start using het in rps soon and make her story continue!!! #EvelynEC #ElizaEC #AngelicaEC #StoryTime #828words
31 Jul, 2017, 9:48 am
Re : Ahah yeah, I don't like Paris that much xD
I have them :p Maybe not lavender fields but some beautiful fields, the more beautiful is probably the fields of "lin" (dunno english word xD)
Oh, I'm sorry for u ^^"
31 Jul, 2017, 11:12 am
Re : Ty x3
31 Jul, 2017, 5:46 pm
What an awesome story, I loved it! And incredible job writing it! x)