Shiny Treecko by Dark_Zekrom

As requested for winning, this is @RapoLulu's Shiny Treecko doodle! I'm still waiting on @Whitefang's request...

I know this is a doodle, but would someone kindly critique this or any other recent artwork of mine? I feel like I could improve on lots.

I also want to draw Pokedex Holder Silver, but I'm not sure how...

#Treecko #Shiny #Hoenn #Grass #Starter #Pokemon #ORAS

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
26 Jun, 2017, 9:08 am
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ReshiramPit

26 Jun, 2017, 10:47 am

Amazing Treecko! I'll gladly critique it. Hmm... the lighting on the Treecko appears messy and uneven on areas such as the curl and beginning of the tail, as well as the right leg. You can fix this by evening and smoothening it throughout the tail so it doesn't look like a blob of light (see my sunset Mewtwo artwork).

You can also use a sharpening light effect (using a thin and middle brush) to show evidence of the effect of light (see my Revali, On the Ocean and N and Reshiram artworks)

Furthermore, unless you intend to do so, don't blend the focal figure too much into the background. Use contrast too. The 'mistake' can be found on Treecko's belly. The light source is clearly where the audience is, and the belly is lighter towards the background whereas the head is not. For such contrast, when the background is light, you have to think about where the light source is where you should avoid blending. If you want to keep the belly light, use the "sharp white line" technique...

ReshiramPit

26 Jun, 2017, 10:50 am

...previously mentioned.
Finally, Treecko's leg looks slightly and unfortunately cut-off. You see where it's lower torso meets with the branch, but the sky appeard and splits the two with a very thin line? It was best coloured in also.

That's all! Your doodle is otherwise perfect! Great job!

As for your Silver artwork, try drawing a scene from Pokemon Adventures manga! But not copied, obviously!

XNei_YuiX

26 Jun, 2017, 11:39 am

This is beautiful ^u^ the only problem I see is Treecko's left leg, but the rest of the drawing is pretty.

Imber66

26 Jun, 2017, 12:57 pm

awesome! I love the shading !

ColorMeInspired

26 Jun, 2017, 1:00 pm

This looks so cool and that shading...wow! ^o^

LuxrayBlossom

26 Jun, 2017, 5:35 pm

woooah i love this! your art is amazing!!!

also, i had to get a new 3ds so i have a new friendcode, and id love to be your friend there again if thats oki :D

LeoMothra9

26 Jun, 2017, 7:47 pm

Can um draw my oc #Sherfo then put #HazeyArt BTW this is amazing

actionshark

26 Jun, 2017, 7:52 pm

SO GOOD!YOU'RE SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME!^^

Penplat

27 Jun, 2017, 12:42 am

This looks fantastic! The treecko family have one of my favorite shiny color schemes. I don't think I have anything to add onto the critiques already made. Heh, I feel a bit sheepish admitting this, but I probably would have missed most of the things mentioned in those critiques as well.

Little angel

27 Jun, 2017, 1:01 pm

Re: Thank you! You know, I don't sew very well, my mom helped me a lot XD
Oooooh so many projects! *O* You can learn! It's not so hard! You must stay determined! :D
Me too I want a Dark Pit plush XD (and Pit too hehe)

HylianFlower

28 Jun, 2017, 4:51 pm

ur art is lit

JayAndVolts

30 Jun, 2017, 11:04 pm

Treecko rocks!

Re: And she's 100 percent right. I'm one of those with a heart of gold (I have a kind, caring and sweet personality). Your art is super epic, too. I'm big fans of Pokemon & LoZ, myself.

JayAndVolts

01 Jul, 2017, 1:07 pm

Re: I got Pokemon Sun and have 7/8 badges.
I might pre-order Ultra Moon.
I do have Breath of the Wild. I'm stuck on the first dungeon. I played it up to there when I first got BotW 4 weeks ago and I have been on a major MK8 Deluxe binge since. But I should be on BotW today.

JayAndVolts

01 Jul, 2017, 1:14 pm

It should be about 2:30pm or 3pm Pennsylvania, USA time.

JayAndVolts

01 Jul, 2017, 1:15 pm

And.. Yes, the letters have to be unscrambled (or rearranged).

JayAndVolts

01 Jul, 2017, 1:18 pm

The arabic.. Is it "I'm very scared of planes"?

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