As requested for winning, this is @RapoLulu's Shiny Treecko doodle! I'm still waiting on @Whitefang's request...
I know this is a doodle, but would someone kindly critique this or any other recent artwork of mine? I feel like I could improve on lots.
I also want to draw Pokedex Holder Silver, but I'm not sure how...
#Treecko #Shiny #Hoenn #Grass #Starter #Pokemon #ORAS
The Colors! Gallery moderators will look at it as soon as possible.
Comments
26 Jun, 2017, 10:47 am
Amazing Treecko! I'll gladly critique it. Hmm... the lighting on the Treecko appears messy and uneven on areas such as the curl and beginning of the tail, as well as the right leg. You can fix this by evening and smoothening it throughout the tail so it doesn't look like a blob of light (see my sunset Mewtwo artwork).
You can also use a sharpening light effect (using a thin and middle brush) to show evidence of the effect of light (see my Revali, On the Ocean and N and Reshiram artworks)
Furthermore, unless you intend to do so, don't blend the focal figure too much into the background. Use contrast too. The 'mistake' can be found on Treecko's belly. The light source is clearly where the audience is, and the belly is lighter towards the background whereas the head is not. For such contrast, when the background is light, you have to think about where the light source is where you should avoid blending. If you want to keep the belly light, use the "sharp white line" technique...
26 Jun, 2017, 10:50 am
...previously mentioned.
Finally, Treecko's leg looks slightly and unfortunately cut-off. You see where it's lower torso meets with the branch, but the sky appeard and splits the two with a very thin line? It was best coloured in also.
That's all! Your doodle is otherwise perfect! Great job!
As for your Silver artwork, try drawing a scene from Pokemon Adventures manga! But not copied, obviously!
26 Jun, 2017, 11:39 am
This is beautiful ^u^ the only problem I see is Treecko's left leg, but the rest of the drawing is pretty.
26 Jun, 2017, 12:57 pm
awesome! I love the shading !
26 Jun, 2017, 1:00 pm
This looks so cool and that shading...wow! ^o^
26 Jun, 2017, 5:35 pm
woooah i love this! your art is amazing!!!
also, i had to get a new 3ds so i have a new friendcode, and id love to be your friend there again if thats oki :D
26 Jun, 2017, 7:47 pm
Can um draw my oc #Sherfo then put #HazeyArt BTW this is amazing
26 Jun, 2017, 7:52 pm
SO GOOD!YOU'RE SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME!^^
27 Jun, 2017, 12:42 am
This looks fantastic! The treecko family have one of my favorite shiny color schemes. I don't think I have anything to add onto the critiques already made. Heh, I feel a bit sheepish admitting this, but I probably would have missed most of the things mentioned in those critiques as well.
27 Jun, 2017, 1:01 pm
Re: Thank you! You know, I don't sew very well, my mom helped me a lot XD
Oooooh so many projects! *O* You can learn! It's not so hard! You must stay determined! :D
Me too I want a Dark Pit plush XD (and Pit too hehe)
28 Jun, 2017, 4:51 pm
ur art is lit
30 Jun, 2017, 11:04 pm
Treecko rocks!
Re: And she's 100 percent right. I'm one of those with a heart of gold (I have a kind, caring and sweet personality). Your art is super epic, too. I'm big fans of Pokemon & LoZ, myself.
01 Jul, 2017, 1:07 pm
Re: I got Pokemon Sun and have 7/8 badges.
I might pre-order Ultra Moon.
I do have Breath of the Wild. I'm stuck on the first dungeon. I played it up to there when I first got BotW 4 weeks ago and I have been on a major MK8 Deluxe binge since. But I should be on BotW today.
01 Jul, 2017, 1:14 pm
It should be about 2:30pm or 3pm Pennsylvania, USA time.
01 Jul, 2017, 1:15 pm
And.. Yes, the letters have to be unscrambled (or rearranged).
01 Jul, 2017, 1:18 pm
The arabic.. Is it "I'm very scared of planes"?