Phoenix's Breakdown part 3 by -GravityPhoenix-

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While Swallow left the kits, the cat had never left, he appeared from behind a wall. He approached the kits, but was blocked by Error. "Move kit, I have no interest in you. The clan needs kits not you." The Cat said looking angrily at him. "I'm not letting you touch my Littermates!" Error shouted at the cat. "Move or you get hurt." The Cat threatened. "Hurt me then!" Error dared the kit looking confidently at the much bigger opponent. "Very well then, you will see what happens to kits who don't corporate with me." The Cat said, it raked its claws across Error's eye then sunk it's teeth into Error's ear and began tugging until the tip came off, the cat stood there with a smug look as Error let out a yowl of pain. His vision faded from his right eye. He felt a paw slam into him as he soon hit the hard alley wall. He blacked out. Hallow watched his older brother, awaiting him to awaken, nothing. "Flint!" Hallow called out hoping his brother would wake up to his name being called, nothing. The cat picked Hallow and Arrow up by the scruff and began to walk out of the alley. Until he was met face to face with Swallow.

to clarify, Error's real name is Flint, he prefers to be called Error to remind himself of the time he had an Error and couldn't save his siblings. Also Hallow looks so upset and confused. Also, The Cat only took Arrow and Hallow because Error would've been to hard to get to the clan camp.

I'm fine, I promise

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13 Jun, 2017, 3:42 am
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EclipseOcelote

13 Jun, 2017, 5:25 am

This story is so cool!!! I love Reading it!

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