As the Star Pillar fell to bits, the wolves gather to see their final night under the stars. As they gathered, the stars began the swirl before them, and seemed as if they were falling to them. Lone reached out his paw, and a star shone infront of his eyes. Snowfall gasped. "This is what it means." she whispered to him. "YOU are the Star Gaurdian!" Her eyes were shining, almost as bright as the stars. His pups looked at him. Next to them,he could see his friends who'd passed. #snowfallwolf#acsocs
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12 Feb, 2017, 4:19 pm
dont mind the description just a part of a story im writing ^
12 Feb, 2017, 4:27 pm
nobody will understan the description I'm sure. XD
12 Feb, 2017, 7:38 pm
It seems like a very nice story!! I could picture it clearly in my mind. You repeated a lot of words, like stars and bright. May I suggest, use words like 'dazzle' for shine and for stars, use 'shimmering heavenly light' just once.