She is a mother... But of whom?
I'll make a ref of her and tweek the design a little.
One of these days i'll get better at shading... Atleast i'm gettimg the fur down :D Would someone please critique this as best as possible? would be greatly appreciated.
#dragon #star #yellow #fur #flight
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08 Feb, 2017, 1:13 am
She's so pretty! And yeah, that shadi is beautiful, keep it up! :D I can't wait to learn more about her!
08 Feb, 2017, 1:18 am
Oh yeah, critique... All I can really think about is the pose. If the lower part of the body is going to be higher up like that as if she's swooping down, then you may want to pull the legs back some. That however is difficult to draw, so I understand, but if you really want to make it look right, then don't put yourself in a situation where you can't fix what's wrong. Maybe you can just lower the abdomin more? Other than that, this painting is perfect. :D
Oh, and proper grammar would be "but of whom". ;)
08 Feb, 2017, 2:44 am
Re: Yeah, I get that. I'm not even sure if I would be able to fix it myself, so don't feel like I'm trying to be better than you or anything. And I hope I didn't offend you - I know I'm reluctant to receive critique, even if I am expecting it. xP I don't mean to discourage or offend you in any way though - I honestly want to help you. ^-^
08 Feb, 2017, 4:16 am
Re: I see, and I understand. I often see what can be improved in others' art, but I don't like giving criticism because I hate offending others and I'd rather encourage than point out their mistakes, but if you ever specifically ask for constructive criticism then I will do my best to help. ^-^
08 Feb, 2017, 7:33 pm
This is very nice! It seems like a very divine dragon!