Sakura Forests by -Vivie-

EDIT- ppppp Instant likes? I'm proud of this nowwwww
Uhhh :-:
I loved this, now I hate itt
It all went downhill when I started shading... Made the colors dark, boring, and murky.. Meh

Nevertheless, critique please?

This has been stuck at 24 likes forever so this one I liked myself pff #SLGOLD

#ValSL #shimmersocs #Usanorux #Norux #SLthisisnoice

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
05 Feb, 2017, 8:58 am
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Pixelated_Prophecies

05 Feb, 2017, 3:29 pm

if you're using black and white to shade, maybe change the shading color a bit? Like if you're shading an orange character you might want to go a little bit closer to red as you go darker and a little closer to yellow as you go lighter, stuff like that. Expiriment with shading colors a bit, I guess?

Other than that, this looks great!

Hollow_Souls

05 Feb, 2017, 7:01 pm

Re: sure and how about the sign is an X instead?

spaceywulf

05 Feb, 2017, 7:28 pm

this looks great! how did you even do that pose??? did you, like, hold your ds at an angle?? bruh.
but anyways, really the only things are if you want her to look more peaceful, the mouth kinda makes her look all tense. also, just with the 3d, try to experiment with having multiple layers of the same thing and erasing. [playbacks with the circle pad tilted so you can see the layers help] this is just so that with the 3d characters fit into the background better and look more life-like.

spaceywulf

05 Feb, 2017, 7:41 pm

[oh, and i forgot to ask earlier.. could you tag the new ref with #ShenirNorux please? that way i dont lose it :3]

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