The First Excursion: 1 by Penplat
First page of Quill’s backstory.
Quill is the highlight of this Pelipper’s route. No one else waits with such eager anticipation for the mail. xD
This page actually came together rather quickly, and I found myself enjoying making it. I think that’s a pretty good sign. Anyway, this is very much a style-in-development, so if you have any feedback on how it can be improved, don’t hesitate to speak up!
Can’t tell if I like the scratchy borders or if I should refine them into solid borders in future pages.
#pmdTFE #pmd #pokemon #QuillTheCyndaquil #cyndaquil #pelipper
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28 Jan, 2017, 5:31 am
Really lovely comic! Really easy to see and you paid well-attention to the minor details. Just to let you know, I started out as a Cyndaquil in my Explorers of Sky game!
28 Jan, 2017, 7:04 am
Smokescreen saved me as well! It is a real lifesaver. I even kept it long after Typhlogan evolved into a Typhlosion! I think I still have Smokescreen up to this day!
28 Jan, 2017, 6:11 pm
Great start! Love the dynamic "camera" and sense of variety.
29 Jan, 2017, 10:56 pm
Wow, this is great!! I look forward to more!
29 Jan, 2017, 10:56 pm
Re: I actually don't know! I had to make up the design from the neck down.
30 Jan, 2017, 6:21 am
Re: Thanks!
30 Jan, 2017, 11:46 pm
Wow, tjis actually looks really good! I love your use of various shades of grey to define bg elements! Is this a backstory of Quil? :o Is that a Pikachu and a Mesprit on that picture too? xD Just trying to make it out.
This is very good! My only issue right now would be the scratchy border. It's weird. I don't know if I like it or not. I'm not too fond of the scratchy but I really like the way it looks, with the varying shades, I think it's better than a solid black border.
01 Feb, 2017, 6:34 am
Re: Thanks!
03 Feb, 2017, 10:21 pm
Re: Yep! My sister named her player in Pokemon Blue Version "Blue" and named the rival "Red"!
07 Feb, 2017, 7:30 pm
I most certainly agree!
13 Feb, 2017, 5:54 am
Re: Lovebirds used Uproar! It's super annoying!
13 Feb, 2017, 7:31 am
Re: Thank you! The soundtrack is amazing. I payed almost 3 hundred dollars for the official soundtrack CDs, and it was worth it!
19 Feb, 2017, 1:36 am
Re: Thank you! Lugia truly is an amazing Pokemon. I dislike it when people compare it with Ho-Oh and vice versa.
19 Feb, 2017, 1:49 am
Re: I'm sorry to hear that you got sick. I hope you're feeling better. And thank you very much for the prayers. I will pray for you too and God bless. ^u^
21 Feb, 2017, 9:54 am
Re: Only in the beginning, but he did those things for a reason, I just didn't want to spoil! He was never really bad, though. He loved Pokemon with all his life and had the power to heal them, read their minds and thoughts and talk to tem, much like the original protagonist Yellow (who, however, falls asleep in use of these powers). At least he became good, especially in the HGSS series!
22 Feb, 2017, 7:19 pm
Actually, in the manga, he helped to stop Team Rocket from- Are you going to read the manga? I don't want to spoil it for you!