Johnny: The series Pilot Ep. by Jon Corp Productions

And now, my third attempt at a series begins. Well, let's see how this goes by putting up a prologue-esque pilot episode! Story will be written in the comments via 3DS (allowing for ease of access), similar to Witzke's A HalloWitzke Special.
I hope this tale provides you with a fun experience!
Story Status: All done, comments are open!

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27 Dec, 2016, 4:48 pm
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Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 4:59 pm

Hey there, my name is Johnny. I'm just your average guy with big dreams, tough problems, and constant bad hair days. What do I mean by all that? Allow me to explain.
It was the summer of fifteen years ago. My family was on summer vacation in the desert, and we were on a very long drive, on a very long road. My parents were able to pass the time by talking with each other (and driving), but I wasn't so fortunate. Being an only child, I didn't have anyone in the back seat to talk to. I could've tried to talk to my parents, but I thought it would be rude to interrupt the nice conversation they seemed to be having.

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:03 pm

What I ended up doing instead was looking out the window and taking in the view, but there wasn't really much to take in. There were some cacti and rocks, but to a five year old, they were't exactly the most interesting things to look at. I was so bored out of my mind I swore that my brains were just going to fall out of my head and leap out the window in search of something more fun to do.
But that's when I saw it...

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:10 pm

Coming up on the side was the biggest, shiniest thing that I've ever seen: a humongous, white rocketship! Now that was something interesting! I desperately pleaded with my parents to pull over so that we could see it, even going so far as to promise not to ask for anything else the rest of the trip, and eventually, they did! I was so ecstatic, I simply could not sit still!
We pulled over to the side of the road, but just when we were about to get out, the rocket initiated launch sequence. I eagerly watched from the back seat, awestruck every second of the launch. I'm getting all excited just remembering it!

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:18 pm

The rocket went up, and up, and up, until it vanished into the blue sky with only a trail of smoke left behind. After that, we drove away and continued towards our destination; my parents kept talking about...whatever, but all I could think about was how cool that launch was. Even when we got to the vacation spot, I still thought about it. I thought and I thought, until I went to my dad and said, "Daddy, I want to ride in the big white rocket!" He chuckled and told me maybe I could when I was older. Being a kid, though, that wasn't good enough for me; I wanted to ride the rocket NOW! And...yeah, you can probably guess what came next.

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:23 pm

The rocket left such an impact on me, it became all I would ever talk about. At school, I would go on and on about how totally awesome it was and never get tired of saying it, even if other people did. It was from that point that I made it my life's goal to become an astronaut. As I got older, I started looking into astronaut schools and rocket science and stuff like that, but I soon learned that my dream was not only a big one, but also an expensive one.

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:29 pm

It was going to take a ton of cash to get where I needed to go, so I got to work and landed jobs as soon as I could. Yet in my haste, I wound up with some jobs that I really didn't like, and I started to question what kinds of jobs would I find enjoyable. It was from then on I decided to only take jobs that would relate to being an astronaut (which could still be a variety of jobs, mind you!).
Time went by, I grew up, my parents booted me out of the house, and I rented my own place, but I still had a long way to go to reach my lofty goal...

Jon Corp Productions

27 Dec, 2016, 5:32 pm

And there we have the prologue! I hope you found this entertaining, but even if you do have any criticisms, I'll still lend you an open ear. Anyway, comment away, and have a nice day!

Astrogeon

28 Dec, 2016, 8:49 am

The story captured my attention. I'm really diggin' this, yo!
:D

Bowpmsas

29 Dec, 2016, 10:17 pm

I think this is a pretty good start, man! It would be pretty cool to have a job as an astronaut or anything related to outer space. : )

wadisono

31 Dec, 2016, 2:54 am

re: Thank you so much!!

AmbyChu

31 Dec, 2016, 4:11 am

Re. I like the idea. It can be like a regular RP room but more chill, aka no dudes to beat up. Although it might be congested and crowded like last time.

AmbyChu

31 Dec, 2016, 5:27 am

Re. Well if worst comes to worst it can be an uncanon New Years RP. But I'm sure the others will approve.
Also is it you that's hosting it or Madi btw? Just curious.

AmbyChu

31 Dec, 2016, 6:03 am

Re. If you somehow get ahold of the others some how that'd be great them.
Well it doesn't really matter who hosts it. Anybody would do. But probably Madi should do it.
Also don't worry about the internet comments. It's fine.

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