please critique this!! i worked super hard on it and loved how it turned out but i still wanna improve<3
#candyflossoc #canine #pink #agbest #crown #cute
wow i cannot stop listening to this song. so many memories
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Comments
26 Nov, 2016, 4:39 am
I love this, especially the crown. :0
26 Nov, 2016, 4:48 am
i look at this and want to be this
26 Nov, 2016, 5:01 am
GEE WIZZ LOOK AT THAT TALENT
your shading and atmosphere is on-key!! the background and fuf and the crown is very aesthetically pleasing.. The only thing i could really pick out that could be improved is the nose placement? it's a liiiil crooked but other than that i really cant think of anything else
26 Nov, 2016, 5:02 am
fur*
26 Nov, 2016, 5:17 am
I personally agree completely with @sylveons! The shading and lighting is really cool, along with the eyes. But, i feel the nose and mouth placement could be changed... even though i believe it is just your style of art. cx
26 Nov, 2016, 5:24 am
(i realized i was on my side account. oops xD)
26 Nov, 2016, 5:35 am
Your colors and bg ideas are so cool aaaa <333
26 Nov, 2016, 5:38 am
AL S O I WENT WITH @EPICWOLFY TO FANTASTI C BEASFS AND WHERE TO FIN D THEM AND IT WA S SO GO O. D O M G
I LO VE NEW T H E S SO PU R E MY HU F F L E PUFF S ON
WE WE RE BOTH SC REAMIN G WHEN IT SHOWE D THE CREATURES IN HIS SUITCASE IT WAS S O. CO O L
26 Nov, 2016, 5:39 am
O H O H. SOR R Y I JUS T SAW THAT NOW YEAH MAN
26 Nov, 2016, 9:51 am
OOOOOOOOOOMG
ahem
well, again, nose looks crooked
tbh the crown is so pretty but it looks like it'll fall off
other than that, dang this is good
26 Nov, 2016, 1:01 pm
whO CARES IF YOU DISAGREE
YOU ARE NOT ME
WHO MADE YOU KIIIIIIING OF ANYTHING
Ayye neat pic!!
26 Nov, 2016, 1:27 pm
I agree with @sylveons! It's absolutely amazing! (This is stupid but the only other thing i can say is that the crown isn't really on his head, but i know that's how it's supposed to be. I'm not good at this xD)
26 Nov, 2016, 2:18 pm
Honestly this whole thing is perfect, sure the crown looks like its falling off a bit but it fits the image! I'd reccommend a lil bit of shading to fit the shading of the eyes too.
I love this soO much though holy-
26 Nov, 2016, 2:28 pm
this is amazing, and i'd like to suggest a try-out: like, what if you blend it and/ or take away the hard lines (as in the hot pink out lines) im not saying you gotta, but i was just suggesting expiriment :)
26 Nov, 2016, 2:35 pm
this is amazing jesus christ
26 Nov, 2016, 4:21 pm
AMAZING DRAWING AND ART! also thanks for the follooooww <3
26 Nov, 2016, 7:35 pm
This is a very great drawing of yours c:! The expression is very cute and i just like the expression. The crown and little jewels are very well shaded but the shading on your oc needs to be a bit dark and a little more noticable. I suggest to practice shading with different dark colors as well. The nose is also well shaded and everything else it beautifully well done c: You've improved a lot n.n
26 Nov, 2016, 7:41 pm
oh btw thank you for your lovely comment <3!
27 Nov, 2016, 1:36 am
Oh I just realized you asked me to note sorry >>"
My DA has always been super weird with notes and keeps giving me errors when I try to send some ??
27 Nov, 2016, 1:45 am
re: np :>
27 Nov, 2016, 3:34 am
hiwhichhogwartshousedoyouidentifyas
27 Nov, 2016, 4:52 am
i was thinking ravenclaw xD mmk
all my quizzes also are hufflepuff ,v,
01 Dec, 2016, 1:10 am
my only real criticism is the mouth's placement on the face- they're very crooked- but i assume that it's part of your own art style. Otherwise i don't have much more to critique. I love te colors you used and think the soft tones matcb your line art brilliantly. good job!