Hallowitzke Special 2, Ghost Flusters (Part FINAL) by Witzke

The final part is up! Normally I'd split this into two parts, but since Thanksgiving is tomorrow, I just need to finish. So just a heads up, this might be a long one. To see the rest of the series, check here #HS2GhostFlusters! I hope you'll all enjoy!

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Status: Finished! Ready for reading in comments!
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#Witzke #Hallowitzke #Skwertle #Victeenie #Ghostbuster #Ghostbusters #Pokemon #Ghost #Prank #Party #Halloween #Scarecrow #Scary #Spooky #Series #Story #Special #Pot

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23 Nov, 2016, 11:26 pm
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Witzke

23 Nov, 2016, 11:37 pm

The pot begins shaking, and Skwertle and Victeenie watch with fear, "Uh, what the heck is it doing?" Victeenie asks. Skwertle responds, "I have no idea, but be prepared to attack!" Victeenie readies an attack, when suddenly, POP! The lid flies off! And something flies out if it, "BOO!!" "Aaaah!" It's #Pumkuboo! Pumkuboo laughs, "He he, I got you guys good! Hey thanks for loosening that pot lid!" Skwertle is confused and asks, "Pumkuboo, what on earth are you doing here?" Pumkuboo explains, "Well, I've been trapped inside of this jar for about a week now! The lid was too tight so I couldn't get out. Funny thing really, getting trapped inside of your own pot!" Victeenie then asks, "Wait, your pot? But this is Lilliegint's house!" Pumkuboo looks at Victeenie funny, "Lillie-who? No one lives in here but me. This is my house!"

Witzke

23 Nov, 2016, 11:44 pm

Skwertle begins thinking out loud, "Wait, so you were trapped in here for a week? Lilliegint did say she moved in here a few days ago. She must've thought that the house was abandoned! I guess we'll need to work this out...Hey how did you get trapped in there? Couldn't you just faze through it since you're a ghost?" Pumkuboo shakes his head, "I tried! But this pot is like a poke ball for ghost types! Any ghost type put inside gets stuck! I suppose I should've expected some catch, since I bought it from a Dusknoir and all. But I couldn't help myself! I just LOOOVE pots!" Victeenie then gets an idea, "Hey Pumkuboo, mind if we borrow that pot for awhile? We need some help, beating some nasty ghosts!" Pumkuboo smiles, "Sure! And I can lend a hand too! I may nit look it, but I'm a pretty powerful Pumpkaboo!" Then, they hear laughing, "Nyek nyek, where did you chumps go?" Skwertle grabs the pot, "Here he comes! Victeenie, Pumkuboo, you guys fight the Ghost, and I'll trap him in here!"

Witzke

23 Nov, 2016, 11:55 pm

Optional music: R/S/E/AS/OR Pokemon Trainer (Or Any Pokemon Battle Music)
The Ghost then runs into the room! "I've found you! Now come 'ere! Nyek Nyek!" Victeenie then uses Shadow ball on the ghost! The ghost dodges, "Nyek, I'm not falling for that again!" Pumkuboo slips behind him, "PumkuBOO!" The Ghost is spooked, "WAH, who are you!" Pumkuboo giggles and says in a low voice like Batman, "Your worst nightmare." Pumkuboo uses Shadow Sneak and hits the ghost! The ghost then begins taking form, "Darn, I can't fight unless I take back normal form! I better get backup!" The ghost tries escaping, but is stopped in it's tracks by Pumkuboo, "PumkuBOO!" Pumkuboo uses Confuse Ray on the Ghost, and it begins wobbling, "Woah, bleh, blurk, Suddenly not feeling good..." It takes form, and it's a #Banette! "Now's our chance!" Skwertle exclaims. Victeenie runs around and hits Banette with Shadow Ball! Banette gets hit head on and gets sent backwards!

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:02 am

Skwertle runs and opens the pot lid! Banette flies into the pot and Skwertle shuts it tight!

Da na na na, na na Na na na na, na na naaaa! You captured Wild BANETTE! Give Wild BANETTE a nickname?

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"Yes! We did it!" Victeenie says. Pumkuboo floats around in circles being happy, "Yay yay! That was fun!" Skwertle then walks out the room, "Now, let's go save Peekatchu and Charmandah, quickly!" Skwertle and Victeenie run down the stairs, and Pumkuboo follows along. They then get to the basement door.

Meanwhile, Peekatchu is hiding behind some boxes, when all of a sudden, "BLARGH!" The ghost pops up! It tries to grab Peekatchu, but Peekatchu runs quickly! Dragging a fainted Charmandah behind him, he tries escaping to the door, but the other Ghost blocks his way, "Got ya!" It grabs Peekatchu and holds him up, "Let go let go let go!" Peekatchu yells. The other Ghost picks up Charmandah, then Charmandah begins waking up, "Ow, my head...What did I miss?"

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:09 am

Optional music: Magma & Aqua leader battle, R/S/E

The Ghosts then begin talking, "Har har, you put up a good fight. I must admit, it was a bit of fun to chase you around, but now, it's over!" The Ghosts laugh, when suddenly, "WHAM!" Skwertle slams the door open! Victeenie comes in and says, "Stop right there evildoers, we are here to bring justice!" The Ghosts laugh, "I figured Banette would be too weak to handle you two, but we're much stronger than that chump! You'll never get out alive! Har har har!" Pumkuboo looks to the side and sees a light switch. He flicks it on and all of the darkness fades away. The two Ghosts are then revealed to be a Dusclops and a Gengar, "Ah shoot..." Victeenie then uses Shadow ball on Dusclops, and Dusclops lets go of Peekatchu! Victeenie uses Shadow Ball again on Gengar, but Gengar dodges. However, Pumkuboo uses Astonish, and that causes Gengar to let go of Charmandah! Charmandah, Peekatchu, Pumkuboo, Skwertle, and Victeenie then all get together.

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:17 am

Optional music: Elite Four Battle, R/S/E

Gengar then looks annoyed, "Great, it's 5 against 2! All of a sudden this isn't looking so good..." Victeenie then raises his hand, "All right men, Charge!" Charmandah and Peekatchu run at Dusclops. Peekatchu tries using Quick Attack, but goes right through him, "Normal attacks don't work against Ghost Types!" Charmandah tries using ember but misses Dusclops! Dusclops uses Night Shade and hits Charmandah and Peekatchu! Peekatchu then says, "Ok, then how about electric!" Peekatchu uses Thunder Bolt, and it hits Dusclops, and it even paralyzes him! "Are you kidding, not fair!" Complains Dusclops. Skwertle runs up and opens the pot! He jumps at Dusclops and Dusclops gets sucked into the pot! Skwertle then quickly closes the lid, preventing escape. Now all that remains is Gengar! Charmandah tries attacking Gengar, but with swift speed, Gengar vanishes, then appears behind Charmandah! Gengar uses Lick on Charmandah and it paralyzes him!

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:25 am

Victeenie tries attacking Gengar with Shadow Ball! It's a hit, but Gengar quickly recovers and uses Spite on Victeenie, cutting 4 PP from Shadow Ball! Victeenie tries it again, but Gengar is quick to use Spite! Soon, Victeenie is all out of PP! Gengar uses Sucker Punch on Victeenie, and Victeenie flies into a stack of boxes! Gengar then laughs, "You wimps aren't strong enough to beat me, I'm too high of a level!" Skwertle then says, "Then maybe we don't HAVE to beat you!" Peekatchu looks at Skwertle, confused by his statement, "What? Skwertle, what do you mean?" Skwertle smirks, "I'm saying we don't need to even bother! If he's really SO HIGH, then we might as well just leave!" Skwertle walks towards the door, trying to exit, but Gengar quickly appears in front of him, "Hey, you can't leave, I decide who leaves!" Skwertle then smirks, "Oh yeah? Well, I think you need to double-check your business card!"

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:31 am

Skwertle tricked Gengar into coming into range! S,wertle opens the pot and Gengar gets sucked in, "Are you kidding me!? Aaaaahhh, how could I be tricked by something so chumpy? What am I Banette?!" Skwertle then closes the lid, then places the pot down, and lies down, taking a breather. Everyone cheers! "You did it Skwertle!" Charmandah exclaims, bouncing up and down! Victeenie says, "Great thinking Skwertle, buuut I think we need to work on your one-liners..." Skwertle grabs the pot and smiles, "Well, our job is done. Let's go report back to Lilliegint right away!"

The five then exit the house, and Lilliegint is seen waiting. "Did you get them?" She asks concernedly. Skwertle smiles, "Yup, taken care of!" Lilliegint starts crying, and Peekatchu is confused, "Wait, why are you crying?" Lilliegint tells them, "I've been harra.ssed by these ghost for so long, and now, I'm finally free!" She gives Skwertle a kiss on the cheek, and his face glows red.

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:37 am

"Thank you. Thank you ALL! I can not thank you enough!" Victeenie then says, "Hey, it was not a problem at all for me-err, I mean us! But we couldn't have done it without this guy!" Pumkuboo then comes over. Lilliegint is a little frightened, since Pumkuboo is a ghost, but Skwertle explains to her that Pumkuboo is a friendly ghost! He also explains to her how Pumkuboo was living here first. Pumkuboo then offers to share the house with Lilliegint, and the two becone friends. Skwertle then looks down at the pot, "So, what do we do with these guys?" Pumkuboo says, "Don't worry, I'll take care of them. I'll release them far away, and after the beating we gave them, they'll never want to come back!" Lilliegint smiles, "And besides, if they ever do come back, I know who to call!" Peekatchu then realises, "Oh snap! We're late for Snyvee's party! We gotta go quick guys or we'll miss it!" The four friends leave, and wave good bye to their two friends. "Farewell! May we meet again!"

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:44 am

Meanwhile, Mercrow and Zoaruah have prepared the ultimate prank! Zoaruah and Mercrow are dressed up as a 6 foot tall, scarecrow, wearing a trench coat and rake hands! Zoaruah is standing on bottom while Mercrow stands on top! "Are you ready Mercrow?" Zoaruah asks. Mercrow laughs, "Caw! You bet I am!" They run on over to the electrical box outside and cut the power. Meanwhile, in the party, all the lights suddenly go out! "Wha-wha-what's going on?" Chezpin asks Snyvee. Suddenly, the main doors swing open, and a giant scarecrow kiIIer walks in! Everyone panics, and the scarecrow knocks over a table! Then, Mercrow, controlling the rake arms, swings them around! And Zoaruah on bottom, begins throwing water balloons around that contain red-dyed water. "This is going great!" Zoaruah says quietly to Mercrow, "We should team up more often!"
Just then, Peekatchu and the gang arrive outside, "Phew, we made it! Hey, what's with all the screaming?" Peekatchu asks.

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:50 am

Optional/Reccomended song: The Original Ghostbusters Theme

Peekatchu and the crew open the doors, and see the giant scarecrow scaring everyone! "Aah, another ghost!!" Says Charmandah. Skwertle smirks, "Well, good thing we know what to do! Cause we're..." They then all high five and say, "GHOSTBUSTERS!!!" They then surround the Scarecrow. Zoaruah is confused, "Uh, Mercrow, what's going on?" Mercrow is stunned, "Uh oh..." Peekatchu, Charmandah, Skwertle, and Victeenie all consecutively attack the Scarecrow, using Thunder Bolt, Flamethrower, Water Gun, and Shadow Ball (respectively), causing a big explosion! Meanwhile, outside, Mudkip walks up to the power box and sees a switch. He flips it, and all of the lights inside turn back on. Then, Zoaruah and Mercrow are seen lying on the ground with a bunch of rubble. "Uuugh..." Zoaruah moans. Peekatchu is surprised, "Zoaruah?! Uh, oops." Mercrow says to Zoaruah, "Yup, that's the last time we team up." Zoaruah agrees, "Yup."

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:54 am

Snyvee comes up to Peekatchu and the crew, "Hey, there you guys are! Thanks for busting this, 'Ghost.' Where the heck were tou guys anyways?" Victeenie laughs, "You have NO idea!" Chezpin says, "Well, we all had a little fun, and now that we're all here, let the party really begin!!" Everyone then begins partying, Mudkip, Zoaruah, Snyvee, and many others! Peekatchu, Skwertle, Charmandah, and Victeenie then all cone together, "Well, I think we can all agree that this was the best party ever!" Peekatchu says. Charmandah then says, "Totally! So, who you gonna call?" They all high five each other at once, and say, "GHOSTBUSTERS!"

Then, the credits roll.

Witzke

24 Nov, 2016, 12:58 am

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Well, that's it for this one guys! : D I hope you all liked it! I had a lot of trouble writing this one, but personally, I think it was even BETTER than last years! I had a lot of fun, and I hope you had a lot of fun reading it! Let me know what you thought, and if you think I should do more stories like these inthe future. And remember, if you have Ghost problems, remember to call GHOST-FLUSTERS! GOOD NIGHT PEOPLE!!! ^O^
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XNei_YuiX

24 Nov, 2016, 9:22 pm

Omg yay Pumkuboo! >w< I loved the story! And yes I think you should do more ^u^ I love reading your stories!

Penplat

25 Nov, 2016, 5:42 am

Nice finale! Lilliegint's ghost problem has been taken care of!

The story was fun to read! I wouldn't mind seeing more in the future. : )

Also, Happy Thanksgiving! Hope you had a good one!

Plutocate

26 Nov, 2016, 12:13 am

Re:Lol that's a good comic idea

YoshiKitty654

29 Nov, 2016, 12:33 am

This story was awesome! I enjoyed reading the whole thing! :D

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