by bunnie
dont sugar coat it.
dont just insult it.
please give actual criticism.
"it's cute! you dont need 2 improve!" & "it sucks & its ugly" are /not/ criticism.
i want to improve. please help ?lmao
#criticize #criticism #art #imjustaddingtags2getnoticed #itsforagoodcauseok
im not talking about just this picture, please look at like.2 or 3 ?? not all my pieces are like this so yeah,,thank u
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20 Nov, 2016, 9:29 pm
Your shading could be smoother,I love how you draw blood though
20 Nov, 2016, 9:36 pm
I think you're anatomy is beatutiful, but maybe when you draw humans, your hands could be better. They kinda look like blobs
20 Nov, 2016, 9:37 pm
//I have this problem aswell
20 Nov, 2016, 9:37 pm
@External: thank you ! it helps alot
i try to have smooth shading but the past months i've been slacking on it, i'll try and work on that.
20 Nov, 2016, 9:40 pm
@Twigs: tbh yeah
ive improved on them but they're certainly nOT good lmaoo
i think hands have gotta be the hardest thing ive ever tried to draw, but i'll try looking up some references & practicing, thank you.
(& thank you for the anatomy compliment ! ive been trying to get better at that this year :'0)
20 Nov, 2016, 10:25 pm
hmmm I'm not sure if i give good criticism but i'll try
ok one, i think you should work on hind legs. i think the rest of your anatomy is pretty good, but it seems like you could use practice in that area. look at refs of cats/dogs. (and i dont blame you i struggle the most w back legs)
two, try varying the thickness of your lines a bit. for example, l love the style of lineart you did in your most recent pic of #tgochloe, but in your other paintings it seems like the lines were rushed. like when two tufts of fur meet, use your eraser and make the meeting line sharper.
uhh thats all i can think of for now? i hope it helps you a bit!
21 Nov, 2016, 4:58 am
I'm not here to crit but I really like your art tbh. aa its very lovely.
21 Nov, 2016, 7:15 am
Hey. Been awhile since you saw me, eh? Anyway, I dunno how to help you improve. It looks good on its own; everyone has their style, so do what you do, I guess.('course that's not gonna help, I know, but y'know)
21 Nov, 2016, 12:15 pm
re: tysm ;o;
21 Nov, 2016, 11:16 pm
@King: aaah thank you !! you have lovely art as well :0
@Airider: aaa dude it's been forever, how've you been ?
& thank you, i dont quite like my style right now but i'm?kinda glad you cant see as many flaws in it as me.
21 Nov, 2016, 11:21 pm
@Alpha: Thank you for the critism friend
with the hind legs, ive been looking at some references & have been trying to get better at that :'0
& the lines (i assume you mean not leaving things like the fur tufts blunt & unsharpened rather than having thicker lines in shaded areas n all that) is more of just me being lazy hhah
i try to sharpen all lines when im working on one of my better pieces (like the recent #tgochloe one)
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& np !