Part 3 is now up! If you want to read the last two parts to catch up, go here! #HS2GhostFlusters! Peekatchu, Charmandah, Skwertle, and Victeenie were on the way to Snyvee's party, until they met a mysterious Lilligant who asked them to help with her ghost problems. She leads them to her house. Now, Snyvee is wondering what's taking them, and Zoaruahs up to no good.
Status: It's all ready to read now in the comments! : D
#Witzke #HalloWitzke #Snyvee #Chezpin #Costume #Party #Mermaid #Flounder #House #Spooky #Halloween
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05 Nov, 2016, 4:17 pm
It is now about to 6:40 P.M. Guests begin arriving to Snyvee's party at 7. Hoever, Snyvee seems a little impatient. Chezpin walks over to her, concerned, and asks, "What's wrong sis? You seem worried?" Snyvee tells Chezpin, "Peekatchu said that he and the others were going to arrive early. It's now less than twenty minutes away and they still haven't showed up. I was really hoping they could help me finish up the decorating in time, but I guess not." Chezpin smiles, "Well, we can do that ourselves! You don't have to worry!" Snyvee sighs, "Yeah, but, it's not like Peekatchu to break his promises. He never breaks a promise!" Chezpin looks down, "Well, you know Peekatchu! He probably got caught up in a goofy adventure or something! There must be a reason. Just don't worry to much. OK?" Snyvee looks at Chezpin, "Yeah. you're probably right, OK!" Snyvee hugs Chezpin. "Now, let's go and finish those last balloons and streamers!" She says. Chezpin is excited, "Yeah! Let's go!"
05 Nov, 2016, 4:25 pm
Meanwhile, Lilliegint leads #Peekatchu, #Charmandah, #Victeenie, and #Skwertle through the forest. They cut through a cornfield and eventually come up to some tall weeds. "Gee," says Skwertle, "You live really far away." Lilliegint sighs, "I know, I'm so sorry for making you have to come this far, but we're almost there!" A bit later, Charmandah notices something, "I think I see it!" Victeenie, due to hus shortness, says, "What, I can't see anything." Lilliegint then answers Charmandah, "Yes, we are here now." They make it through the tall dead grass, and come upon an old, dillapidated house. "This is your house?" Skwertle asks. Lilliegint looks down, "Yes, it is. When I tried to get away from the ghosts that were haunting me, I had to find the furthest, cheapest house I could, due to my lackluster income. I found this old barnhouse and immediately bought it, but, the ghosts moved in as well. Do you think you can handle this Ghostbusters? You can not if you want to. I understand..."
05 Nov, 2016, 4:35 pm
Victeenie puffs out his and says, "Of course we can, we're Ghostbusters! We ain't afraid of no ghosts!" Lilliegint bows her head in respect, "Thank you so much. I will let you in, and I'll wait out here. They'll start coming very soon. They always arrive at just as the sun disappears. You should probably use this time to set up your Ghostbusting traps. Just a warning, they'll probably start off by messing around with furniture or stuff like that. And DON'T stand under the chandelier!" No one has anything to says in response, except for Peekatchu, who is shivering with fear. "Is he OK?" Lilliegint asks. "Uh, yeah, he just gets, cold really easily." Victeenie responds. Lilliegint reaches into her cloak and pulls out a key. She put it into the door and unlocks it. A cold wind then blows past the four busters. "Good luck," Lilliegint says, "If for some reason you need to get out, I'll be waiting right out here to open the door. They like locking doors, but with my key I can open it."
05 Nov, 2016, 4:47 pm
One by one the four friends enter the house, and Lilliegint closes the door behind them. After looking around for a bit, Skwertle snaps at Victeenie, "Great, just GREAT!!! We were all supposed to be heading to a party, and we'd all dress up as Ghostbusters! First, you change your suit and mess up the plan, and now, you've gotten us ALL trapped in some crazy mess, where we have to battle some who knows HOW powerful ghosts, and possibly get us all kiIIed! And look at Peekatchu! He's so scared he's still shivering and hasn'tbsaid a word! Ugh, you're always so full of yourself Victeenie, you always brag about how you think you're so GREAT, yet those are all lies! And now, you've gotten us ALL in trouble because of YOUR lies, and because YOU wanted to be the Hero!" Victeenie then tries to defend himself, "Well, look at you being a great friend! I try to go and do something nice and you have to go and be so unsupportive!"
05 Nov, 2016, 4:55 pm
Lilliegint can hear some fqint yelling from outside, "Wow, they must be very passionate about their work." Victeenie and Skwertle continue arguing, until Charmandah steps in, "OK STOP!!!" Everyone stops and looks at Charmandah, "Look, I get Victeenie can be a bit egotistical at times, but we are where we are, and yelling won't solve anything right now! Right now, we've got some Ghosts coming to get us, and we need to stick together as a team, the friends we really are, if we're gonna get through! I know that we're not REAL ghostbusters, I know we bought these costunes online and these proton oacks are made of cardboard, plastic and other household materials, but we CAN still be great and pull through if we do it as a team." Skwertle looks down and sighs, "Charmandah's right. I'm.....sorry Victeenie." Victeenie even seems a bit down and says, "Yeah, I guess....I'm....srry." Peekatchu then jumps for joy, "Cone on guys, group high-five!" They high-five, and then the cuckoo clock chirps.
05 Nov, 2016, 5:02 pm
Meanwhile, Zoaruah, heads into the garage. Before he gets rhere though, his mother catches him, "Where are you going Zoaruah?" #JuneRaichu asks. "I'm going to Snyvee's party now!" June then resoonds, "But it's dark now Zoaruah! You should've gone with Peekatchu earlier! I dob't want anything bad happening to you! Here, I'll come with you!" Zoaruah realises that will ruin his plan, and tries to talk her out of it, "Uh, no, mom, it's fine!" Just then, #DanZoroark, who was sitting on the coach reading the paper, gets up, "Honey, let him go by himself. It's a part of growing up! He needs to learn to be independent." June sighs, but smiles, "Well, I guess your father is right. Just make sure to come home WITH Peekatchu all right? And take this flashlight too!" She kisses him on the cheek, "Just please be safe my little baby!" Zoaruah blushes, "Mom, geez, cut it out. Bye!" Zparuah then heads into the garage, grabs his wagon, and heads toward the rec center.
05 Nov, 2016, 5:04 pm
Well, that's all for today's issue! : D You can comment now. If you liked the story, be sure to let me know, so I can make more! And if there's something I need to improve on, I'll gladly accept critique! Well, I hope you all enjoyed! : D
05 Nov, 2016, 5:13 pm
Snyvee is dressed up like a mermaid, so cute! x3 It's time to play with some ghosts ^v^I can't wait to read next part to see what happens ^^
XD Poor Zoaruah his plans were almost ruined
05 Nov, 2016, 8:17 pm
Re: I hugely agree with your statements, man. I know that Clinton hasn't done a lot of justice in the White House from what I've heard. As for Trump...yeah. Despite the support he's gotten, I'm still not in the mood. I'm unsure about who to vote for... ;p
Still, no matter who wins I won't drive into protest and get dramatic. As long as the new president does a good job in helping the USA and get things done, I'll be happy. ; )
I'll check out that video [though if the point is similar, I won't watch the whole thing. XP]. ; U
05 Nov, 2016, 8:22 pm
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05 Nov, 2016, 8:55 pm
Loved this installment of ghost-Flusters! I hope you keep making more!
But I wanted to ask. Do you want to do a support between #Mariusfebi and #wgabriel ?
I think it would be a funny one!
06 Nov, 2016, 1:43 am
At this rate, Zoaruah is going to beat the others to the party. xD
Nice work on the story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!
06 Nov, 2016, 6:16 am
Thanks for comment to my old drawing (*^^*)
I am glad you thought like that
Your gallery is very great!
07 Nov, 2016, 6:47 pm
Re: thanks! I haven't seen it yet q^q
09 Nov, 2016, 9:59 pm
Hey Witzke are you ok? I don't see you active as always >v< Did something happen?
10 Nov, 2016, 12:36 am
Re: When I was writing that description, I actually did stop and wonder "hey, wouldn't a photo shoot technically qualify as secret life material?" xD
Needless to say, I found it humorous and left it in.
Actually, now that I think on it more, participating in a photo shoot would be hard to keep secret, considering that the pictures would be visible to the public through an ad or something similar.
10 Nov, 2016, 7:42 pm
Re:I WAS SO WORRIED! xnx Are you better now?
11 Nov, 2016, 7:51 am
RE: yeah, this is probably one of my most thought out series yet. Even better than what I /don't/ post. You wouldn't be wrong to expect a lot from this one.
Btw, the others posted with that should have more info if you haven't checked them out yet. I'll probably find time this weekend to draw and/or post more.
11 Nov, 2016, 7:55 am
Anyway, what's up with you? I've found I don't ask that enough.
11 Nov, 2016, 2:49 pm
Re: *gives you a Super Potion* :c