Hallowitzke Special 2, Ghost Flusters (Part 2) by Witzke

IMPORTANT!!! To my fellow Christians, I urge you to look at this video, it is incredibly important with that's happening right now!
video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xvMjacTYrY

Here's the next chapter! If you want to see the previous story, you can check it out here! #HS2GhostFlusters! The stories get written in the comments. Peekatchu and crew head towards Snyvee's party, and Zoaruah seems like he's up to something. Btw, I hope you had happy Halloween! Well, I hope you'll all enjoy! : D

Status: All done! Ready to read and open for comments! : D

#Witzke #Hallowitzke #Peekatchu #Charmandah #Victeenie #Skwertle #Zoaruah #Pokemon #Ghost #Halloween #Special #Ghostbusters #Garage #Story #Series

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02 Nov, 2016, 8:06 pm
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Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:24 pm

#Peekatchu, #Charmandah, #Skwertle, and #Victeenie all walk along the sidewalk towards Snyvee's party. "How much further until we're gonna get there Peekatchu?" Charmandah asks. Peekatchu answers him, "Not much longer Charmandah!" Charmandah ponders to himself, "Come to think of it, how did Snyvee even get permission to use the recreational center anyway?" As they continue walking, Victeenie complains to Skwertle, "Hey Skwertle, mind switching places with me? You're too tall, and I can't see past you." Skwertle tells Victeenie, "You know you're not going to be able to see past Charmandah anyways." Victeenie is annoyed with Skwertle unwilling to cooperate, so he starts climbing up his shell. "Hey, what are you doing!?" Skwertle asks. Victeenie looks around amazed, "Wow, so this is what it's like to be tall! I'm in control now, so I say, head forward!" Skwertle is angry at Victeenie and tells him, "Get off of of me Victee-" Suddenly, Skwertle starts losing his balance.

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:31 pm

"Ah, woah, look out!" He almost falls onto Charmandah, but manages to tip himself the other way. He keeps hopping to try and regain his balance, but heads toward a garbage can next to a house. He crashes into it! The garbage can tips over and Victeenie flies off of him, "Woah!" A Lilligant falls out of the garbage can and Victeenie lands on it. Peekatchu and Charmandah turn around shocked, "Woah, what just happened?!" Charmandah asks. Victeenie shakes his fist at Skwertle, "Next time I'm making Charmandah my minio-Hey what the?" He notices the Lilligant under him. "Please, get off of me, it hurts!" The Lilligant pleads with a soft voice. Victeenie gets off, "Uh, sorry. It was all Skwertle's fault though." Skwertle is mad at what Victeenie just said and retaliates, "My fault?! You're the one who climbed on me in the first-" "Guys come on now's not the time for this!" Charmandah says as he intercedes. Peekatchu and Charmandah then help the Lilligant up.

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:41 pm

Skwertle is very concerned, "Are you all right?" The Lilligant replies, "Yes, I am." The Lilligant dusts itself off. Peekatchu then asks, "What were you doing in the garbage. *gasp* Were you, spying on us?" The Lilligant answers, "Yes, I, I was following you." Peekatchu then panics, "Stranger Danger, STRANGER DANG-" Charmandah covers Peekatchu's mouth. The Lilligant then pleads with them, "I'm so sorry, but I had to. Please, hear me out! *sigh* My name is #Lilliegint, and I need your help! My house is run over by spirits, and they won't leave me alone. They haunt me every day and night, and sometimes even go so far as to cause me harm. Lately, things have been getting much worse. I ran away looking for help, and I happened to notice you four Ghostbusters!" Skwertle interrupts, "Woah woah, hold it right there. We're not real Ghostbusters! These are just costumes! We can't really bust ghosts!" Charmandah then asks, "Why can't you just by a new house?"

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:48 pm

Lilliegint then befins crying, "I've tried, but no matter where I move, they follow me around. It's horrible I tell you. Please, I am begging for your help! Please help me out!" Everyone is silent, no one is sure what to say. That is, until Victeenie walks up in front and proudly says, "Of course we will help!" Skwertle then snaps at Victeenie, "Are you insane!? We're NOT Ghostbusters! Look, don't get me wrong, of COURSE I want to help, but we can't do this, it is way over our heads!" Charmandah raises a question as well, "Yeah, and what about Snyvee's Party?" Victeenie then says, "Oh come on Skwertle, what's the worst that could happen? It's probably just a Shuppet or something, and I'm a VICTINI, remember? One quick Pokemon battle and DING, problem is solved, and we become heroes! And Snyvee's Party, that can wait." Lilliegint jumps for joy, "Oh, thank you, Thank you so much for being willing to help me! I'll be sure to reward you!" Victeenie laughs, "Don't mention it!"

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:52 pm

Lilliegint then says to Victeenie, "You must be the leader, right? That explains your courage, and your differently colored suit!" Victeenie then whispers to Skwertle, "Told ya this beige didn't suit me!" Skwertle just rolls his eyes. Lilliegint then says, "Let me lead you to my house, then you four can get to work! This way!" They then begin following her, afraid of what Victeenie moght have gotten them in to. They follow her to the outskirts of town, as they head towards Lilliegint's house.

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 8:59 pm

Meanwhile, back at his house, Zoaruah goes into the garage. "Now, where's something I can use?" Zoaruah grabs a cardboard box, and starts putting things into it, like an empty garbage bag, a skateboard, a rake, a bag of water balloons, and many other miscellaneous items. "Ha ha ha," He laughs to himself, "I'm gonna be at Snyvee's Party all right, but after what I do, I'LL be the one everyone will be talking about! I'm gonna crash the party and prank everybody! And it'll be 'the bomb!' Muahaha!" When Zoaruah finishes packing his bulging box, he loads it into a small wagon, "Gee this is heavy! Now, all I need is some facepaint and Kool-Aid. And maybe some Jell-O." Zoaruah then walks inside to grab more things.

Witzke

02 Nov, 2016, 9:02 pm

Well, that's the end of Part 2! ^u^ Thank you very much for reading, I hope you enjoyed, and I hope you look forward to the next part! Feedback is also greatly appreciated, cause then I can improve on things. If you want to read the previous part, check here! #HS2GhostFlusters and you can even read last year's special here! #aHallowitzkeSpecial! Well, I hope you all enjoyed! : D

XNei_YuiX

02 Nov, 2016, 9:14 pm

Aaaw poor Lilliegint, hopefully Victeenie and the others can help her with those spirits qwq Omg Zoaruah... XD

Heishi

02 Nov, 2016, 11:48 pm

Somethin' strange, in the neighborhood, who ya gonna call?
GHOST FLUSTERS!

The_Adjudicator

03 Nov, 2016, 12:59 am

I'll take a moment later to read this story, because they're usually quite funny, but in the mean while..
Regarding that video: Trumpet and Hitlery (pardon any offended name calling) are like choosing which monkey we can most tolerate throwing crud at us. Though they are not the only options. I place my vote on any other option (even if it has no impact on the tally) specifically so I can say I did my part to prevent this. I hope I'm not the only one.

The_Adjudicator

03 Nov, 2016, 6:31 am

Alright, I went through and read tge story (It seems you have a knack for story telling). You could make something out of those skills.

Reply: I see your perspective on it. And I do agree.
One thing I would like to say, however, is that if it were part of God's plan for something to happen, then by any means, it will happen. Take the story of Jonah as my favorite example of "the easy way, or the hard way". I'm pretty sure the great fish option was only plan B on an A-Z (so to speak) series of methods that would have got Jonah to Nineva, one way, or another. Even so, we'll still be held accountable for anything that we may have aided in the cause, or prevention there of.

I know it's a round about way of saying this, but just because something bad happened, doesn't mean it happened because we deserved it. It only matters that you endured faithfully to the end.

XNei_YuiX

03 Nov, 2016, 3:30 pm

Re: tired as always, I wanna sleep XDD jk, I'm good, just a lot of exams to study ^^' And you?

The_Adjudicator

03 Nov, 2016, 5:16 pm

Oh right, the other question.
I think my Miiverse user is just Adjudicator. Though I'm never there anymore
And my DA is TheAdjudicator92. Again, never there either.

Astrogeon

03 Nov, 2016, 9:45 pm

Re: I saw the video just as you mentioned it. I had no idea that I was already practicing the concept. When I thought about it, I thought of Ms. Frizzle when she says "Make mistakes. Make mistakes. Make mistakes! It is the best way to learn."
Point is, thanks for helping to clarify that point.

Penplat

03 Nov, 2016, 11:55 pm

Nice story, Witzke! Of course Victeenie assumes leadership of the group. xD
Wonder what kind of prank Zoaruah has in mind.

Also, I saw the video. It confirmed what I had already heard, but there were a few details that I wasn't already aware of. Regardless, no matter the outcome, always remember to remain faithful. God is never taken by surprise.

-Splash-

04 Nov, 2016, 12:53 am

Re:Omg yas, I mean if it's fine with chu X3 Btw love this story so far cant wait till the next part :D

StorytellerEspeon

04 Nov, 2016, 1:59 am

Thank you for understanding. Just know that I don't hate you. Asides from this, you have been a really good friend. I just can't go over this again. I will always love you and wish the best for you and your family. I'm probably gonna block you now. Sorry. I love you.

YoshiKitty654

04 Nov, 2016, 2:37 am

Whoa, I'm really glad I live in Canada right now... I doubt it'll really make much difference soon, though.

But hopefully they can flust some ghosts!

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 7:01 pm

Re/ Uh I hope you feel better -n- stress makes everything worse XD And thanks ^v^ I really enjoy drawing water!
Have a great Friday! >w<

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:18 pm

Re: of course I care! o^o are you alright?

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:27 pm

Re: ug... so sorry qnq. Anything I can I do for you? >.<

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:28 pm

I can do* what's wrong with me today

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:42 pm

Re: oh okay, and yeah if you want to ^v^!

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:46 pm

Re: today some random things happened XD I have discovered that my math teacher is a Pokémon fan >w>

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 9:53 pm

Re: ikr XD btw I have been exploring your gallery and you have improved a lot ^-^! I love your comics, you have really good ideas x3

Bowpmsas

04 Nov, 2016, 10:00 pm

They say "Who ya' gonna' call?" not "Who should you find on the street?", but okay [Peekachu and the others would make great Ghostbusters though! CX]. X'D

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 10:07 pm

Re: yep ñvñ I wish I could forget some things that happened during this time.

Bowpmsas

04 Nov, 2016, 10:10 pm

Okay so I saw the video and I really want to get this off my chest:

I do believe in the Christian faith. Hearing what was in the video did make me cringe and I really wish Clinton never mentioned the 'deplorable' word. DX<

However, I just can't stand Trump at all, man. From the controversies, to the words he's used in the past I just can't vote for him. It takes more than words to make an impression for me. Some of them aren't quite accurate to what's going on in the world, too...

[I might go for Johnson from the looks of it...]

I dunno', man. I'm not a person who wants to change people's minds. I respect your views and I'm sure all of us can respect each other on that. ; O

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 10:11 pm

Re: those experiences only helped me to become this nervous and shy person xvx but I don't want to bother you with these things XD sorry

XNei_YuiX

04 Nov, 2016, 11:00 pm

Re: don't worry! ^o^ thank you it was funny to talk with you ^^ see ya! ^v^

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