PART1 by toatsMergoats

so i found this spoopy mini novel i tried to write in 8th grade
and in the [late] spirit of Halloween, decided to share it with you tell me if you like it after i type it up.

#storytimwitgoat

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
01 Nov, 2016, 11:04 pm
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Kimioko/Kora

01 Nov, 2016, 11:30 pm

cool

Fifty_Diamonds

02 Nov, 2016, 2:15 am

can I have a fluffy marshmallow please Blitz?

toatsMergoats

05 Nov, 2016, 12:46 am

I woke up and got ready for school, just like every morning. As I went down the stairs to start making breakfast, I got this feeling. I didn't understand it, I couldn't. Without thinking I tripped on my own feet. I was always a clumsy girl. After getting back on my feet I made it to the kicthen. I didn't expect to find what I did.
A strange man in a labcoat was sitting at the kitchen table casually reading the paper.
"Who the Cr4p are you!?," I demanded.
"That is classified, I am just here for you"
"How the- what do you want from me?!". I was starting to wonder what this man's real intentions were...

"I am just here to get you. You can come now and friendly like ,or I'll take you by force!," the man yelled.
With all this yelling going on I didn't understand why my dad hasn't come running down the stairs with his rifle. Something must be wrong.
"Where is my family?!," I yelled. "What you done to them!"
The man began to chuckle "Not me,stupid girl, but you."
[cont]

toatsMergoats

05 Nov, 2016, 12:47 am

[cont]
I look down at my hands and see them covered in blood as well as my clothes
--END OF PART ONE--

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