Forgive me if I did Kotori wrong X-X
My first try at a female character so I hope I did it good enough. 0.o This is going to be a great support! :D #febi #febisupport #febikotori #mariusfebi
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26 Oct, 2016, 7:29 pm
"Hmmmm....." *Adjusts his crouching position on tree branch* "Finally! Its about time someone arrived at the bathing lake..." *He would be gazing at the lake. Unaware that Kotori is not too far away.*
27 Oct, 2016, 1:12 am
It's not unusual for the diviner to come near the bathing lake to calm her nerves or just go in. Kotori sighs, maybe being near the water would help calm frazzled nerves or something, not even noticing Marius on the tree branch.
27 Oct, 2016, 1:35 am
Marius would be gawking at a female unit entering into the lake"Oh yeah...She's a looker!" Suddenly at that moment, When his anticipation was at its peak...*CRACK!* The tree branch that he had been using for weeks now had finally given into hours of strain* "What?! N..n..NOOO!!" He would fall with the broken branch pieces and hit the ground. "Ughhh.....Oww..."
27 Oct, 2016, 4:18 pm
And there comes the shriek of the women that was going into lake, and regretting their decision.
"Oh no."
27 Oct, 2016, 4:42 pm
With the wind knocked out of him and his mind still blurred from the shattering impact, He faintly heard a womans scream.
He would open his eyes to try and find out what on earth had gone wrong. And he would see the woman leave the lake.
He would gasp a plea that was barely a whisper.
"No...Wait..Don't go...You were about too...Ughh..."
His head would be pounding with pain and he was in no condition to walk.
"H..Help...Somebody...Urk...My head..." His voice would be frail and deprived of the air he normally had.
28 Oct, 2016, 11:05 pm
"E-Eh..?" Hello reaction to noises, and Kotori's immediate decision to run in doesnt click well with her wanting to get the heck away fro there, she cringes and goes in.
29 Oct, 2016, 12:33 am
All his cries for help had fallen flat. So he did the only thing he could do. He started crawling toward the lake.
Marius:"Just.....*cough*..A little....*Wheeze*..Farther..."
He crawled halfway into the lemon grass which surrounds the perimeter of the lake.
He would sway back and forth for a moment before passing out into the lemon grass. His hand poking out the other side of the grass clearly visible from the lake.
08 Dec, 2016, 3:40 pm
( Support end......I guess :l )