Alydia surely deserves an epic quest! ; )

First comment?

I have to say I really like your artstyle. It gives a lot of expression to the characters, and the coloring and lineart are almost sketchy but not entirely.

Just wanted to tell ya that

^ Same here, I've liked Whoever,s artstyle since the beginning. :P

And that poor tiny crook.

You can definetly fit more detail in with less panels.