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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
28 Sep, 2016, 10:18 am
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CritCorsac

28 Sep, 2016, 10:46 am

Very nice portrait once again!

Lynarc

28 Sep, 2016, 10:47 am

thank you!

WolfInTheRain

28 Sep, 2016, 12:02 pm

Wow! This looks perfect!

Jim-Kira

28 Sep, 2016, 12:20 pm

Pretty!Otherwise your art trade is available on my gallery ^^

Jim-Kira

28 Sep, 2016, 1:49 pm

Re:Thank you!^^.Oh okay,take your time(but not too eh)xD

Pink_angel

28 Sep, 2016, 5:38 pm

This is so beautiful! I don't have any, critiques to give.
(QwQ great job<3

The_Adjudicator

28 Sep, 2016, 6:02 pm

I don't think there's much that can be said to improve this, as far as critique goes. I suppose her hair feels a little dule. Maybe you could give that a little more shine and depth? Otherwise, this seems about as good as it gets. : )

Lynarc

28 Sep, 2016, 6:29 pm

Ah yes the hair, the most difficult thing for me atm (apart from bodies) :P
Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated :D

mcollins

29 Sep, 2016, 12:02 pm

I quite like the way the hair was done. I don't have any suggestions, it's great the way it is

Lynarc

30 Sep, 2016, 5:23 pm

Thanks! :3

SeaGlass

14 Oct, 2016, 3:22 pm

Her hair lacks variety in tones, too little shadows & high lights. It may also benefit from a few more loose strands.
The light source is confusing me as well, it looks like it's coming from in front of her face and a tad up (despite the shine in her eyes implying a light source from her lower left & middle right). Yet you see her hair casting little shadow upon her face & other hair pieces. While you can get away with that with soft lighting, the shadow underneath her chin implies a harsher light, as does the shine in her eyes.
Maybe... maybe she just has a soft light all around her? It's very hard to tell, it might just be me.
Regardless of that, I can see how much detail you put into this & it came out beautifully. It's almost all perfect except the hair which has some lumpy shading patches in some places.

Lynarc

15 Oct, 2016, 4:25 pm

Ah thanks! That was a very useful critique. I see what you mean with the lighting.

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