Robots by kirstene
The poem is from May and I thought it went well with ERROR. I wrote it! :O
The poem has a five eight five eight syllable pattern up until the last line so it emphasizes the importance of the last line.
@VenoShade was posting some poems so I thought I might share one of mine.
I'm embarrassed at how long this took to make
#GalaxyBound #ERROR4O4KS #cartoon #city #night #poetry #cute #cool #shading #background #perspective #Tres4KS
-KS
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10 Sep, 2016, 1:56 pm
WOWOOWOWWOW OKAY THIS LOOKS REALLY RAD FIRST OF ALL!!!!
AND DA N G LOOK AT THIS!!!! YOU'VE REALLY IMPROVED LATELY!!!!! LOVE THIS!!!!
Ahhhaa, my poems are mostly me expressing my bleeding heart, HAHA. At least I'm honest with writing down my feelings??? I dunno. :P
10 Sep, 2016, 3:49 pm
LORDY GOSH IM SO HAPPY TO FINALLY DONE, IT CAME OUT SO WELL ITS SO PRETTY OMGGGGGG
I REALLY LOVE THE POEM AND THE PERSPECTIVE'S GREAT!
You're improving so much omg I love it!!
I'm too shy to show my own poems cause they emo
but really fam, this is amazing.
10 Sep, 2016, 3:59 pm
WOOOWWIE THAT TURNED OUT REALLY GOOD
I'm not a poetry person but dang this picture turned out gr8. That background is really pretty
11 Sep, 2016, 3:26 am
Re: Story sounds awesome! Not at all boring cant wait to read it
17 Sep, 2016, 2:25 am
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I'M REALLY GLAD YOU NOTICED THAT THE TAIL HAS FANGS IN HIS FEAR CORE FORM I WAS REALLY HOPING SOMEONE WOULD POINT IT OUT THANK YOU